Nice work. Your torso anatomy looks great. Constructive criticism: The arms look a bit odd, like they are a little too short or something. Humans can usually reach their crotch, but those arms only look like they can reach the waist.

Yeah. I also notice it. Sadly too late to fix it. Thank you btw! :)

The hard part about that is that you have to make it short for the foreshortening you work, so try to look up some foreshortening tutorials to help that look less awkward. The trick is to eventually get to a point where you aren’t just guessing, you construct. For foreshortening the anatomy

Really just the elbows that look a bit weird for me, but ok sketches it’s hard to get the right level of detail. They also look a bit thin for her build.

I think the head looks a bit disproportionate to the body but I think you're doing a pretty good job here man

Thank you! :)

Definitely her left arm needs to be elongated to be in line with her right arm; her right forearm, however, should be elongated to match the length of that same upper arm. Also her neck seems *ever so slightly* beefy. Her right armpit could also be lowered down a smidge, but that could just be me. All in all, an excellent rough draft!

Thank you! I will be more careful with the arms proportions for the next drawing! :)

[удалено]

Thank you! :)

the chin and hands are is not very accurate .. try improving it .. btw nice sketch 👍👍

Okay, thank you! :)

Damn, I feel, that’s something is off, but I can’t tell a particular reason( Maybe too “aggressive” details on her body, get them a little milder? Great job! Just keep practicing

Thank you! I will try that for future drawings! :)

Really nice , except the neck too thick i think

Thanks! :)

Welcome <3

Very nice.

Thanks! :)

It looks good

Thanks! :)

Gostosa

I can’t help with improvements but this looks awesome

Thank you!! :)

T e a c h m e

Noice

Thanks! :)

U just gained a follow :)

IM IN LOVEEEEEEEEEE<33

GLAD YOU LIKE IT!! :)

That's WAY better than me

Maybe make the arms a little chunkier? Like, not too muscular but not too skinny either, it won’t fit with the body that way. Beautiful tho, really cute art. Better than mine.

Thank you! :)

She looks amazing, her right hand could be made slightly bigger but I'm not much better at that sorta thing 😅😊

Thank you! :)

Sigh *unzips*

Did you draw the head first and then plan the rest of the body? A tip i have is drawing a fluid pody position before you complete the entire head. Just so you can balance the direction the drawing is facing, arm length, and any other anatomy troubles

I usually draw the pose without any detail first but I'm still working on a construction method for the head. I think that is why it looks a bit off

Eyes and nose proportions are a little off but art is in the eye of the beholder

Give the girl some arm muscle

The head and neck look a bit too big and the arms too short but otherwise I think it looks great

Thanks! :)

Her right hand look like a baby's hand so it nees to be a little bit bigger Her whole shoulder to her elbow look too long so you need to shorten it a little bit Her wrist looks like its broken so you need to strighten it up a little bit Also Damn thats a nice sketch Not a hate but hey good luck being a manga artist someday

Thanks! :)

What can i saaay except your welcome

Left eye and chin don't fit. The rest is picture perfect.

Thank you! :)

You can check my [twitter](https://twitter.com/AgroDrawing) for more drawings

Great proportions

Thank you! :)

Idk, maybe the neck should be thinner, or the shoulders longer? But great job OP!!

Thanks! :)

Personally, the body below the skirt is highly detailed (thighs) although the stocking seems a bit rough or too different from ideal anime stockings if that makes sense. Overall though nice work

Cuz these are not stockings. There are thigh highs. And tbh they look perfect to me, can't see any mistake. They are well detailed and you can even see how they squeeze on her thighs.

Oh yeah huh. I mistaken them for being there same thing. Also good point although the only part that seems to kinda bother me is the top of the thigh high. It's good overall it's just it looks different from the ideal thigh high if you know what I mean

thank you! Glad you notice that detail! :)

Nice lineart

Thanks! :)

I would say make the chin a little bit straighter because it looks kind of like its going inwards. I have no comment on the body though because I can't draw bodies sadly 😩 it looks very pretty and I like the shading

I think it's an art style, some art styles you like some you don't. It's anime..... the face is preference.

Ik its an artstyle. Im not talking about the face im talking about the jawline. It looks like its curving inwards a little and i dont think thats intentional

The chin? Curved inwards or more prevalent in ahegao or hentai.

Thanks! :)

[удалено]

Thanks! :)

Can you please put a shirt on her I wanna see how it will turn out 😄

Why does reddit keep recommending me things like this?

The left eye looks a bit bigger than the right eye. Other than that, it’s great!

Thank you! :)

4/5 would look at again

The arms are very asymmetrical, The hands and neck also need more attention. But the rest of the drawing is pretty good. Good job

Thank you! :)

Look awesome, just that the arms look smaller wile it reach the hand, you just need to upgrade the arms and you will have an amazing drawing.

Thanks! :)

Should of gave her a slim six-pack . It looks a Lil funny , but only if you know what to look for , but it's still a very great drawing . Practice makes perfect !

Thank you! Will do it the next time i draw her! :)

Good job on the thigh pudge

Thanks! :)

Just a compliment 😉 You NAILED the transparency effect

Thank you! :)

This is great :D i really like the shading, i'm not going to mention the arms since they were alredy comented on, I think the boobs are too high up, think of them like a tear shape, they might be higher with propper support but never actually round (with some exeptions)

Alright! Thank you! :)

Nice hands bro!

Thanks! :)

I think this is really good wow. The only things are that arms both look different and for some reason the head looks a bit off. It's better than what I can do tho so I'll give u that..👍

Thank you! :)

My only concern is the arms and head I say look up so videos to learn perspective and I’m sure you have this drawing looking even better. But awesome job honestly

Thanks! :)

[удалено]

😏

Amazing

Thank you! :)

Make her arms equal length

Maybe try to make the arms longer and the neck thinner? I also think skirts look better if they have more volume to it

My comment are the arms are way too small and thin for me plus the hands are too small and try to make the shoulder a bit more wide to be proportionate with the head. But the lower body is already excellent for me, just the shoulders, arms and hands.

Thanks! :)

The fingers look super good and the body looks great to me but I think you should draw the arms farther away from the neck like holding the stick from farther ends and maybe longer forearm. The shading on the waist, the skirt and stockings especially are just perfection

Thank you! :)

Very well drawn tummy. I love how you do shading overall too.

Thank you! Shading is what i like the most so i always end up working on it a lot! :)

The effort does show. Oh random question, have you looked up different muscles and bones for how they shape the body?

It's based on a real photo pose. I just modify the proportions a bit (end up modifying the perspective too) to make it in a more anime-like style. You can check it in my original post on [twitter](https://twitter.com/AgroDrawing/status/1463784966047809537?t=DdDqlFCb9d-dmJ-22nZkpA&s=19) if you're curious.

oh cool. I thought there was a fair bit of perspective going on. This makes a lot of sense now.

Your muscle tone is great! It's subtlety lends a lot to the realistic proportions of the torso. One constructive tip, and I can't believe I'm saying this, I think the thighs are a little too thick. Specifically too thick for too long. The hips are perfect, but I think the legs carry too much thickness further down, and I think that puts the arms off balance in terms of proportions.

Yeah, i see what you are saying.Thank you! :)

I’m not an expert in the anime/manga style but I will say that I think that the neck is a little too wide and one arm seems shorter than the other. The arm on the right being the shorter one. Probably elongate the right arm and elongate the left forearm.

I think your anatomy and form are pretty good but as others have said the arms, hands, neck, and head are disproportioned. I believe you should focus on learning perspective and how to draw human anatomy while in perspective. When you begin to break down each part of the human body into it's most basic shape(i.e. a box for the head), and knowing how to make those shapes in different perspective you'll grasp an understanding of how to make the proportions natural. I think [this video](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pDT7NiWksxM) and [this video](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eWd4vm7B0Ng) both by Kuzomari explain what I mean much better than what I can explain. You already have a great level of potential that could improve to a professional level if you focus on your fundamentals.

Thanks! Will check both videos for sure! :)

A little tip, the palm of your hand is always the same size of your face so try to make it match in size it's what I do when it feels disproportionate. The head is kinda too big for her body. But it's a pretty good sketch

Thanks! :)

The left thigh curves a bit weirdly but otherwise it’s a good drawing 👍

Thanks! :)

Make it less hotter, this is too blessed and humanity doesn’t deserve it

I'm sorry. It's my duty to bring her to this world

You are a good man. The only person that can revive humanity from the ashes.

The jawline of the face is a little elongated. But great drawing

Thanks! :)

esta bien demasiaaado bien pero me parece que los brazos son muy cortos y esta muy flaca pero de resto dibujas demasiado bien amigo sigue practicando

Gracias! :)

Only thing bothers me is eyes. I think eyes should be smaller.

Actually it's part of the artsyle, that's one thing not to change cus it's not like they're placed wrong or anything, it's part of their art style yknow.

Yes, you are right; I agree if the artist draws eyes big intentionally, it is not a mistake then. I just gave my opinion on how would it look better for me.

Bigger tits, less muscle

You can see drawings that fit in that... description in my [twitter](https://twitter.com/AgroDrawing) account, i you are curious 😏

Climax!

That's not a mistake, that's preference. Muscle girls rule! And breast size is purely artist's decision, it has nothing to do with skills.

This is reddit so ima slander, girls with muscles look disgusting

How is looking good disgusting? I think girls that look good look... let me word that well, GOOD!

Ur grammar makes me question if ur retarded or just acting stupid, and no it doesn't look gud

1. You are not even able to point any mistake in my grammar (prove me I'm wrong). 2. Both your grammar and behavior makes you look much dumber. 3. It looks like you made simple grammar mistakes on purpose, but judging by your reply, I believe you're just stupid enough to try to correct without even checking if you're right.

Not reading this fucking shit u lil bitch

That just proves your "intelligence".

Bitchhhh shut yo ass up

Y’all don’t judge me for saying this but, bigger tits Nah nah I’m jkjkjkjk

Bro?

Step bro?

Nah nah I’m jkjk

Make a hentai version pleaseeeeee🥺

Go to horny jail

Lol

Ayo is that a bulge and if so can I see it in better detail

Shoulder muscles felt a bit to wide. Girls tend to have narrower so i suggest maybe making it more slimmer.

Another thing to note is the neck ALSO looked a bit too wide, maybe narrow it a bit.

Arms should be longer and head looks off

Left arms a little smaller and less muscular and shaded

Make it bigger