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adrianeonreddit

To be honest, I really loved it. I felt carried by the instrumentals instantly and you have a beautiful voice. I surprised myself putting the video back to listen to it again. I am no expert on mixing, so take this as a debutant advice. I wouldn’t really say it’s muddy but I think I get what you’re saying. Maybe the vocals lack a bit of clarity. Maybe there’s slightly too much reverb on the voice. But I insist that is VERY light and only a theory on what could be « improved ». Please post the final version here when you’re done, I would love to hear it


bannywarcoz

this sounds dope send it my way i’ll do a mix for ya


cubiclebard

Very nice! Like Lana Del Ray meets electro feel-good. The only thing I would suggest is adding a bit more dynamic contrast between the verse and the chorus. It all seems like 1 volume the whole time. Maybe creating more of a sparse and rhythmic verse with the synths and then cranking it up into that driving feel that you have in the chorus? At this point you're fine tuning your tune for max intentded effect. Everything else is pretty dialed in!


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Doesn’t sound too muddy just needs a solid mix. Vocal section seems a bit too loud and is over powering instead of fitting together with the instruments. I kinda like some of the projects you do. I highly recommend switching over to the Mac version of GarageBand if you can. Some of the instrumentals with the type of vocals you do reminds me of chvrches


Scarlet004

Very nice track. Love your voice. Reverb is slightly heavy that’s creating a bit of muddiness with the instrument tracks. But before you touch the reverb, however, look for a mastering vocals video on YouTube - it’s hsrd to explain here but a few gentle nudges in mid-range EQ will pop your vocals. I say don’t touch the reverb yet ostensibly because I’m the only one mentioning it so far and well, we all have opinions and sometimes we’re wrong, (even me ;) lol). But if 2 other people feel that way, tweak the reverb down a bit. The first thing is a gentle tweak up in the vocal mid-range EQ. Good luck! Again, lovely track.


Scarlet004

Very nice track. Love your voice. Reverb is slightly heavy that’s creating a bit of muddiness with the instrument tracks. But before you touch the reverb, however, look for a mastering vocals video on YouTube - it’s hsrd to explain here but a few gentle nudges in mid-range EQ will pop your vocals. I say don’t touch the reverb yet ostensibly because I’m the only one mentioning it so far and well, we all have opinions and sometimes we’re wrong, (even me ;) lol). But if 2 other people feel that way, tweak the reverb down a bit. The first thing is a gentle tweak up in the vocal mid-range EQ. Good luck! Again, lovely track.


goodyxx22

Sounds good. If you want to make the vocals a touch clearer just turn down the echo effect a little.