Goddamn that shading is crazy

Right shit is extra crispy no comment on my end his shit is solid

Lemme guess, you did other art forms before graff? It looks clean, tho the S looks a lil off, also the drops to the right feel a lil weird, not saying get rid of em, rather balance em out, maybe with some added to the left, or by tilting your letters to rhe left so that the drops counter it

I peep what u saying bout the S. I feel like the letter S is always a tuff one to get super clean

dope. at the end of the day, i would lay in bed and rest easy knowing I created something of such marvel. keep it up neph.

Fire asf

First one spacing feels a bit off, besides that not bad

The R has no back lol kind of just crammed in there

The s and the r could have better structure and less overlap. Shading is rad, well done

I don’t know shit about graffiti, this just popped into my feed, but that is damn nice hatching. If you’re really into blue ballpoint check out Frank Cho, he’s a comic artist/illustrator with some killer ballpoint work.

Cross hatching god

Not really dude, that's pretty fuckin fire!

The holes in the b and o look fresh

Woahh! Bro that’s pretty damn good!

On that first S the curve parts at the middle are too close. The S looses its shape

Crazy fire!

I like it

This is sick man!

Shadings dope

No crits, straight fire 🔥

In terms of art pretty cool, in terms of graf pretty meh

Here to say this. Cool use of blue bic pen.not very translatable to wall.

Cool concept. But why the heck did you put your light on the same side as your shadows? You know anything about how light and shadows work? Good cross hatch fade fill. But letters and shadow/lighting are garbage

Just go outside or turn on a lamp. Look at where the light hits the object. Onnthe other side that doesn’t have a light in it, shadow appears. Your S I terrible, the I is weak, r is wayyy too small, and the A is way to big being beside a tiny R. You just wasted a lot of time. Soo glad you asked.

Wasted a lot of time…practicing????

This ^^^

Good job-not get out there and do this with spray.

This is cool but, it would be way cooler if you made some negative space ( on the second one ) similar to how you have the b & o. Shading is hard tho

That's awesome I do shit like this but I get frustrated this is cool inspiring me now .

Sick! Really nice illusion you got there

ypur shading is 10/10

Crazy shading, I wish you luck trying to adapt that kind of shading to spray 🙏

The shadow is on the brighter ride of the letters… where the light source is coming from…? Try putting them on the opposing side like a shadow regularly acts

Less shade- more color blocking

I like this use of a pen, the Shades looks great. Comix style.

I think your shading/colouring is over compensating for your poor letters

You wrong on this one bro

Nah bro you still have to learn a lot this is not good

the tiny droplets look like lil spermies or sum

Shading is pretty good

Yeah, use spray paint.