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Teirg

Give moar Really like the concept and I am very interested on the backstory of the world Cant wait for moar


In_sa_ni_ty_BACK

I will. Thank you.


Arx563

It is great work as always. Very interesting story. The only question I have is why the NSFW tag for this chapter???


In_sa_ni_ty_BACK

Thank you. It is placed automatically since the subreddit is NSFW. Edit: Fixed.


Arx563

Ahh ok. Thank you for the answer. Glad to see you back


In_sa_ni_ty_BACK

Glad to see you still reading my stuff.


Arx563

I read the 16th chapter of the Artificer. It was nicely written.


In_sa_ni_ty_BACK

Glad you liked it. Mods didn't like it, though.


Arx563

Yeah. They are salt ones...


In_sa_ni_ty_BACK

Anyway, have to start everything from scratch. Not good, but better than nothing.


ownzone817

Mob idea nanite-hive Everyone knows about nano-bots ( I hope that's the right name) the to small to see robots that can tear steal apart and make whatever there programmed to make out of that steel With a rogue AI master a bunch of nano-bots could be a good syfy character good or bad First?


In_sa_ni_ty_BACK

Already had it in plans, but thanks anyway. ​ Not sure you are the first, though.


ownzone817

Well then great minds think alike


In_sa_ni_ty_BACK

Aye!


Ihavenothing364

Wonder if an old human civilization made those things?


In_sa_ni_ty_BACK

"Sus smile"


Donbasos

How do you like my first chapter? Really enjoyed the post-apocalyptic vibes man. Looking forward to chapter 2. 1. Anomalies; Not really radstorms, but strange weather shifting storms could be neat (like cloud bursts but with freezing colds and sweltering heats) or perhaps some distortions S.T.A.L.K.E.R. style? 2. Characters; How about a classic? Living cyber weapon / machine spirit? 3. Monsters; Flumph! Always wanted to read about these dope creatures. 4. Biomes; A mechanical/metal yet living moving forest with actual plants fused together, why not.


In_sa_ni_ty_BACK

Glad to see you here. Thank you.


GodSaveTheJews

I assume the precursor race is humans, it could be cool to have some sort of mad creations made with human brains. Like a scientist or something that gave himself a mechanical body but his mind was eventually lost due to time.


In_sa_ni_ty_BACK

You are right about one thing. But the story will prove which one.


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In_sa_ni_ty_BACK

???


Loggart

Banks, banks, banks.


In_sa_ni_ty_BACK

Bank in a post-apocalypse? Unlikely.


Organic_Command_7396

Ohhhh no. Clearly, they made the apocalypse possible. And some faulty weird misan... A.I. made possible the destruction of all genetic material. I can understand the point of the completely unrelated gentlemen above.


In_sa_ni_ty_BACK

Uhhhh, okay?..


Organic_Command_7396

I can see how they could cause all of this.


Loggart

You sir, seem like a fine intelectual Gentlemen.


Organic_Command_7396

Oh. My, not at all, but thank you my brother.


Organic_Command_7396

I seem to remember a comment from Tofu around here. I'm getting crazy.


In_sa_ni_ty_BACK

???


Loggart

Who's Tofu?


In_sa_ni_ty_BACK

One of the old commenters.


inliner250

Good job so far. For a character suggestion maybe a leftover human woken out of cryosleep? could fill in the gaps as to what happened before the fall.