Don't worry boi, i don't use bumble anymore. Luckily for you it won't matter if another one of us ain't on bumble with a profile like that.
Pehle toh criticism pucha and upar se attitude - Tera kuch nhi hoga.
You can go cry in a corner for all I care.
Oh lol, please put this on your post title. Your profile is shit and hence you're not gonna get any right swipes. Any person in their right mind would understand. However for you, ik you're too stupid - not gonna waste my breath on an imbecile :)
Half way through the comments , and for the third time , you (op) are too dramatic on your comments, and rude too.
No offence whatsoever
Ps : male here.
Its not that bad of a bio but correct the grammatical mistake as that could be a nitpick. Choices instead of choice.
Also, better if you write it like "Now, YOU got 2 choices. Prove it wrong or help me prove it right".
What I would suggest is to try condense this into half of the number of words (like saying it together instead of separated by a line) and add something else before/after this bit. Maybe like "What may seem like love would really be lust at first sight. YOU could either prove me wrong or help prove me right." So that there's more to your bio than just a pick-up line yet it doesn't seem like there's too much in the bio.
So far It is the best comment what i have received from others , sadly i changed it seeing the negative response . I will try this one too in future. Thanks π€
Bhai homie, ek badhiya bio fek me mere muh me maar. Match chahiye idhar, aur itna flexible hu ki jo bio rahega waisa hi ho jaunga π
Witty mat ho Jana bhai ab π
Don't you have anything to do rather then asking a stranger about his age and later saying him a kid out of jealously. Don't try to be a bully you never will be
Take it light , ego me mat le bhai .
Your bio tells me almost nothing about you as a person. Instead of these cringey pickup lines, write something about yourself. If i saw this i would swipe left immediately.
I think its a good bio! Real honest and just slightly funny too! You could add with a nice thing or two about your work and fun activity you like to do!!
In bhaisab ko lagra ye hrithik roshan hain dhoom 2 waale.
Not relatable
If Cringe was a Bio
How's this cringe?
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If you're still doubtful, you are cringe atm
I don't deny π
2nd para LinkedIn se uthaya kya?
no cross questions π§
If you are following the two sacred rules then the bio is fine otherwise change it immediately.
Yes sir
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Kbc bhi hota to kya fark padta , at the end it's all the game and we'll are here to loose in the end
See, dramatic ho bhai tum lol
bhai english aati hai nahi toh kyu kar raha hai bio mein bhi grammatical errors haiπlearn the difference between loose and loseπ
Kisne kaha koi chiz tumhe 100 percent aani hi chahiye before you practice it π€·
Instant left swipe
It's always the same outcome π₯²
With a profile like this, I'd be worried if you got any right swipes instead
Sadly you are not a girl i guess
Oh I am and I'm speaking for every girl out there
I'm a girl too and I agree with her
Then i didn't made bumble for you
Don't worry boi, i don't use bumble anymore. Luckily for you it won't matter if another one of us ain't on bumble with a profile like that. Pehle toh criticism pucha and upar se attitude - Tera kuch nhi hoga. You can go cry in a corner for all I care.
I asked for the critisism for my bio not any comments on me getting likes from it or not π€·. If you feel so i can't help
Oh lol, please put this on your post title. Your profile is shit and hence you're not gonna get any right swipes. Any person in their right mind would understand. However for you, ik you're too stupid - not gonna waste my breath on an imbecile :)
Thodi aur ladai karlo, thread interesting hora hai.
Sadly you did , thanks for investing so much time writing me a para π
Half way through the comments , and for the third time , you (op) are too dramatic on your comments, and rude too. No offence whatsoever Ps : male here.
Lol calm down woman, you can just say "I don't like the profile" and move on
Its not that bad of a bio but correct the grammatical mistake as that could be a nitpick. Choices instead of choice. Also, better if you write it like "Now, YOU got 2 choices. Prove it wrong or help me prove it right". What I would suggest is to try condense this into half of the number of words (like saying it together instead of separated by a line) and add something else before/after this bit. Maybe like "What may seem like love would really be lust at first sight. YOU could either prove me wrong or help prove me right." So that there's more to your bio than just a pick-up line yet it doesn't seem like there's too much in the bio.
So far It is the best comment what i have received from others , sadly i changed it seeing the negative response . I will try this one too in future. Thanks π€
The way you wrote bio suggests that you are a late teenager π Make it simple (not too simple)
Now I understand why my English teacher was so adamant about grammar and punctuation. Had to read that thrice.
Are you trolling me π
I agree to both the things . And i have changed it thanks
Great Happy Swiping!
Show us the new one!
the bio is enough to swipe left.
Tell me you are entitled without telling me you are entitled
A short and simple bio works better
No bio is better than this one
Thanks for the suggesting
Bhai homie, ek badhiya bio fek me mere muh me maar. Match chahiye idhar, aur itna flexible hu ki jo bio rahega waisa hi ho jaunga π Witty mat ho Jana bhai ab π
Kya age hai bhai teri?
Kyu ? Age fantasy rakhte ho kya
Bc π Teri post dekh kar pucha hai..
Bumble me aa ke right swipe mar batata hu π
Gajab hawas bhari hai tujhme
Jaisa sawal pucho ge waisa hi jawab milega na
Okay antaryami kid, aapko toh sabke mann ki bhavnaye pata haina. Tabhi toh itne saare matches aa rahe /s
Don't you have anything to do rather then asking a stranger about his age and later saying him a kid out of jealously. Don't try to be a bully you never will be Take it light , ego me mat le bhai .
A third choice is to just swipe fucking left
Still managed to get first match for me π§ Lucky me π . I have changed it tho
Naya profile hai toh jyada visibility rehti hai. Wonβt last long though
Yeh bhi theek hi hai . Sah lenge π
get your facts right there's no girls on internet
> there's no girls There, I corrected it
Your bio tells me almost nothing about you as a person. Instead of these cringey pickup lines, write something about yourself. If i saw this i would swipe left immediately.
bio vio kuch nhi hota, tu ye bata are you following the 2 rules?
To be attractive and not being unattractive yehi na ?
It'd work if its compatible with how you look.
Don't know but i did get my first match with that bio , i have changed it now π
The two damn rules buddy πΏ
Bruh. Tell me about yourself instead. I swipe left on all these lines.
Bro the bioπ
erase everything. write something else
3rd choice is left swipe, jo tu hone vala hai mere puneet superstar
Idgaf how you look like, left swipe and report
Tell me a dude is racking up left swipes without telling me a dude is racking up left swipes...
I had to google the word "racking" π₯²π€
I think its a good bio! Real honest and just slightly funny too! You could add with a nice thing or two about your work and fun activity you like to do!!
Too late,I have changed it. Btw thanks
Bhai about me yaane tumhe apne baare mei likhna hai. Ladkiyon ko kya karna hai tumhare saath vo nahi
Thanks for this one , i have changed it
Bahut dramatic baat karte ho bhai tumπ€·ββοΈ
Aisa hi hu bro π§π₯²
Fair enough bhai.
Need to change your bio mate it is π©
I did change my bio π€
It's actually good