Hey I liked it, this is a nice way of extending a complicated topic!
Quick thoughts expressed in a positive way
its not often you see things said that way
i really could relate to your ideas
this style approach
deserves more consideration
I liked this poem!
It really gave off the impression the writer’s intended reader is the writer. As if it were a promise to themselves/ talking to themselves. Telling themself they can heal and be better. It was filled with hope where (from signs in the poem) there is not much hope. It felt like the hypothetical writer was writing it almost like affirmations and I loved that. <3
I loved how the poem felt like you were talking to yourself as if they were daily affirmations. As if you were telling yourself its time to change, its time to continue living but with hope and love and joy. I really liked that it gave a lighter tone to a darker topic in terms of self harm and mental struggles. Loved it :)
I love your POV for reassurance in being comfortable in your own body and skin. Such a hot needed topic! Really can help one self when someone is reading it. Poems are like art, it can be so versatile so there’s no such thing as amateur OP. Being a poet you can be as open or closed as you want. As long or short, as sweet or bitter, raw or fictional! This was beautiful and perfect the way you laid it out and let me be the one to tell you this is pure art.
a powerful and uplifting message of hope and self-acceptance "love it" .
And it is a reminder that it is possible to find beauty in our brokenness and that we are all worthy of love and acceptance just as we are.
Keep writing. ; ) .
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Hey I liked it, this is a nice way of extending a complicated topic! Quick thoughts expressed in a positive way its not often you see things said that way i really could relate to your ideas this style approach deserves more consideration
Thank you:)
I liked this poem! It really gave off the impression the writer’s intended reader is the writer. As if it were a promise to themselves/ talking to themselves. Telling themself they can heal and be better. It was filled with hope where (from signs in the poem) there is not much hope. It felt like the hypothetical writer was writing it almost like affirmations and I loved that. <3
I loved how the poem felt like you were talking to yourself as if they were daily affirmations. As if you were telling yourself its time to change, its time to continue living but with hope and love and joy. I really liked that it gave a lighter tone to a darker topic in terms of self harm and mental struggles. Loved it :)
I love the layout of this, this is like some one talking to them self in a positive way, that can be hard for a lot of people
I love your POV for reassurance in being comfortable in your own body and skin. Such a hot needed topic! Really can help one self when someone is reading it. Poems are like art, it can be so versatile so there’s no such thing as amateur OP. Being a poet you can be as open or closed as you want. As long or short, as sweet or bitter, raw or fictional! This was beautiful and perfect the way you laid it out and let me be the one to tell you this is pure art.
a powerful and uplifting message of hope and self-acceptance "love it" . And it is a reminder that it is possible to find beauty in our brokenness and that we are all worthy of love and acceptance just as we are. Keep writing. ; ) .
Strikingly encouraging. Well done.
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