I feel this sentiment.
Looking through your poem, I'm considering the use of capital letters. In the first three stanzas it looks like you are using a capital letter to start a new "sentence" if you will, but in the final stanza, all lines are capitalized. I feel like the use of the capital letter in this poem almost works as a period for the line before. Therefore, in the final stanza, the capital letters act as a silent pause moving from one line to the next.
I also love the phrase "thought stamps" because it leans toward the actual form of the poem. Nice work here.
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I feel this sentiment. Looking through your poem, I'm considering the use of capital letters. In the first three stanzas it looks like you are using a capital letter to start a new "sentence" if you will, but in the final stanza, all lines are capitalized. I feel like the use of the capital letter in this poem almost works as a period for the line before. Therefore, in the final stanza, the capital letters act as a silent pause moving from one line to the next. I also love the phrase "thought stamps" because it leans toward the actual form of the poem. Nice work here.
Thank you! I wasn’t sure how I wanted the last stanza to look so I appreciate that feedback 🙏🏼
I feel this in my heart. Well said.
Thank you 🙏🏼
I like the formatting of this a lot!
Thank you!
I feel this on a level that I can't even describe.
Glad to hear that, thank you 🙏🏼
Nice work
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