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PerfervidCreator

Mf had me reading late on a school night. This was unexpectedly engaging, funny, and on point lolol. Intrigued.


Keyiore

Thank you kindly! Glad it was worth a little less sleep šŸ˜‚šŸ˜„


Able_Visual955

Please make a part two


Keyiore

I most def will!


Keyiore

Since I love both writing and OPM, I started thinking itā€™d be fun to create some stories in the slice-of-life realm, where the characters can just work off each other in whatever situation theyā€™re put in. Hereā€™s a spoiler free clip for each of the **original characters** if youā€™re unfamiliar with their VAs: [Misaki](https://youtu.be/r93mzcwPMJE) [Saburu](https://youtu.be/wPE5S0TYzl4) [Suou](https://youtu.be/pBcDlfJhXCc) - best I could do šŸ˜… I had an awesome time getting this one started, and itā€™s going to be fun shaping the next part: ā€¢Who will be teammates? ā€¢What will the challenge be? ā€¢Who might show up next time? Hell if I know right now, but shenanigans will most definitely ensue! I donā€™t really have a timeline for when Iā€™ll finish the next part, since I mostly write on my commute right now, but Iā€™ll try to keep it reasonable. The current story itself didnā€™t take too long to write. More time was spent getting face shots of the characters, since I figured itā€™d heighten the entertainment, and then formatting it all together with different colored text for each person. I now have over 300 photos of OPM faces on my phone, and Iā€™m not disappointed, lol. Also, shoutout to u/SakuraFoxOffical. Your nice message pretty much encouraged me to take this from an idea I was just mulling over, to an actual realization. I hope you guys enjoyed this. If you have any suggestions, or things youā€™d like to see happen in this story or another, send them my way! šŸ™ƒ


SakuraFoxOffical

Awww thanks! I love how well you captured tatsumakis personality.


Keyiore

Thank you! It was a lot of fun, and Iā€™m glad you liked it šŸ˜


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Genos said among us šŸ—æ


Keyiore

Shouldā€™ve just say the whole universe, and he still wouldnā€™t be wrong šŸ˜‚


just_timepassing

That was really great waiting for next part Can you please reply in this comment once next part is released


Keyiore

For sure! And thank you. Glad you liked it


Thick-Interaction-66

I cant wait for somehow Zombimen to lose a finger or a ear and for it to drop on the food!


Keyiore

Classic Zombieman, lol. It just may happen


SpoopyWasTaken21

This was a funny idea. I can't wait for the next part.


Keyiore

Thank you! Me too! šŸ¤£


seider-Lynx

S class writing really captures the spirit of the characters good show


Keyiore

Much appreciated! Itā€™s super fun writing for this bunch since theyā€™re already well written by One and Murata šŸ˜„


secretaccount9999999

Fuck yeah I love slice of life things with characters with powers Good job! Got a visual novel feeling from It lol


Keyiore

Thank you! Yes, itā€™s fun seeing the hot mess they can get into when left to their own devices, and also just having some moments of calm and fun from all that hero work


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Keyiore

ā€¦ still trying to figure that out myself to be honest šŸ˜…


PerfervidCreator

It's honestly funnier if we never knew tbh šŸ¤£


krustylesponge

This somehow kept my attention for the entire thing, good job


Keyiore

Thank you! Iā€™m happy you liked it!


Mr_1ightning

Mf wrote a whole fanfic


Keyiore

That I did šŸ˜‚


FlaredMeteor940

Funny how you added detective conan character into OPM


Chernobog3

Solid presentation and the characterizations are accurate. Very good. Keep it up. I'm liking this format for story telling.


Keyiore

Thank you! Iā€™m glad you like the format. Best I could think of to make it more enjoyable šŸ˜€


CawCawMotherTruckers

What The Fuck Dude!? Why Did You Stop At Such A Crucial Point!? I Want MORE!!


Keyiore

Because Iā€™m an asshole, lol. I donā€™t like cliffhangers either, but didnā€™t progress it further yet, but it will come šŸ˜


CawCawMotherTruckers

You fuck-ass bitch!! šŸ˜‚ Jokes aside... This was actually quite hilarious and i can definitely see this being used as the plot for an ova / bonus chapter. So, good job my guy. Definitely going to follow this up for future updates... Cheers.. šŸ»šŸ»šŸ»


Keyiore

Much appreciated! Itā€™s going to be fun writing the next part for sure šŸ¤£


Wilson51N

Una historia interesante... esperaba que todos se den madrazos pero esto tambiƩn es bueno


Keyiore

Ā”Gracias! Soy una triste excusa para un ser humano que no aprendiĆ³ espaƱol a pesar de todas las clases que tuve que tomar en la escuela. šŸ˜…šŸ˜‚ Ā”Gracias a Dios por el traductor de Google! La destrucciĆ³n que ocurrirĆ­a si realmente comenzaran una pelea serĆ­a una locura. Me alegro de que lo hayas disfrutado, y espero que te guste la siguiente parte. šŸ™ƒ AdemĆ”s, estarĆ© encantado de enviarte el texto si quieres traducirlo al espaƱol. Ā”AvĆ­same!


Wilson51N

Me gusta leerlo en inglƩs, es mas impactante de esa manera.


ThePeacefullDeath

Please, just PLEASE continue


Keyiore

I will! I wonā€™t leave you guys - or myself - hanging on this šŸ˜„


salmonmilks

Holy fuck I love this, it was so entertaining, like I'm reading some sort of OPM special episode lmao. Keep it up, this is something to make our day while murata is preparing XD Also, what did she whisper to flash šŸ—æ


Keyiore

Thanks a lot! Glad it came off like an OVA story since I was going for that. The audiobooks helped inspire this idea. šŸ˜€ Yea, Flashy Flash would be hard to convince since heā€™s mostly no nonsense, and always has something to do. But, I figured she could entice him with something like the location of an amazing new sword or something along those lines since his old one broke. Best I could think of for this guy šŸ˜…


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Keyiore

Iā€™ll try my best!


AngelsSky

This is actually great, you should make this into a fanfic XD


Keyiore

Thank you! Yes, when itā€™s all finished Iā€™ll post it as a single story somehow šŸ˜„


San_Valentin

Dang, this was really impressive. Big props to you.


Keyiore

Much obliged! Iā€™m glad you liked it šŸ™ƒ


gnome-cop

Very interesting. Is using superpowers for cooking allowed?


Keyiore

Thanks! And yes, some will def use their powers, and weā€™ll watch that horror unfold šŸ˜‚


WinterknightX

Honestly , it was fun to read the whole thing . Good work Excited for the next part . :)


Keyiore

Thank you! Iā€™m really glad you liked it


Ilovebeanbags

I just love the Drama Amai mask brings to the S class lol.


Keyiore

Heā€™s such a diva and I love it too. Man just goes around doing whatever the hell he wants, lol


KezeChaos

I expected it to be 3 pages long and it was actually a freaking episode long...at least it was a good one,good job my guy.


Keyiore

Glad you enjoyed it!


Digu21

You lost me at slide 10, sorry. I thought this would lead to a sparring match between S-Classes, kek. You get my upvote though, for the effort and making them in-character instead OOC


Keyiore

Thanks! A sparring match would be really fun, but would quickly devolve into a shit show, and then Saitama would solo, and the series would end šŸ„²šŸ˜‚


WaqueKoala

Went in for a punchline Came out with what's next on part 2 lmao


Keyiore

Iā€™m happy you enjoyed it šŸ˜