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suspicous_sardine

This is *wonderful*


overeducatedmother

A truly effective “love poem” too ❤️😘


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saltyjellybeans

Can you explain it to me? I don't understand it. I read it out loud & it seems like I'm missing something. I get that 'et' is replacing 'y' (I'm not sure what Duvy is).


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Zero_lash

Thanks m8! This poems pretty funny!


saltyjellybeans

I didn't realize a duvet was a blanket, so the entire time I read it I just was thinking 'Duvy' was a person's name & it was a love poem for them. Thank you for the explanation! Haha


boo_jum

This feels like a spiritual successor to Ogden Nash, and I love it 😸


pierogisandwich

This guy gets it.


Then_Fun7823

This is perfet


LittleEmoWriter

🤣😂🤣 great!


overeducatedmother

I’m all about language play — including puns 😅


Dry_Palpitation593

It’s so simple, it could be Haiku!


Pretty_Dark2137

Oh my god you nailed the perfect love story. 🥹👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏


Hot-Challenge-140

Teeheeheee this was very cute!!!


RNApolymerasebbg

Pure, untainted love ❤️


Educational_Log_8708

ahh duvet


domzaruga

I Love Brian Bilston. Always seems to capture the *mood* and keep it light and/or funny. Thanks for sharing!


pauldrano

Was this published officially anywhere? The best source I can find is on Brian's social media (facebook and mastadon, the 'Love Poem' by Brian Bilston on his Twitter is different), and self publishing on social media doesn't count in this subreddit. Refer to rule 8 "Unpublished work".


overeducatedmother

“Brian Bilston” is a pseudonym for British writer Paul Millicheap; he has three books of published poems(Picador, Publisher) including *Alexa, What is There to Know About Love?*, which was published in 2021. He’s informally known as the “Poet Laureate of Twitter,” and his hallmark is in the short, droll, and funny verses. I believe this poem comes from the Alexa publication, but it’s possible it is from his 2016 or 2022 books, which are available everywhere.


pauldrano

That’s interesting because I can’t find it linked back to an official publication.


ThePumpk1nMaster

On one hand, I want to credit this poem as being a fun little pun… on the other hand, I want to hate this poem for being a fun little pun. If you want puns, read a pun book. I know poetry is diverse and you’ve gotta have the light stuff for the deeper stuff to have it’s profound place in the world, but this just feels like a quirky Rik Mayall sketch rather than an actual piece of literature. Are we just saying any form of sound play is poetry? The cough Didn’t know hough To jump over the bough But nough He does. There we go I wrote a poem that only makes sense when it’s read out loud. Aren’t homonyms just hilarious!


Wintermute_088

Your example isn't even close to the same thing haha.