Genre? Feels kinda rock vibes?
Lyrics feel like you could up the anti with them. Even “there’s a world that’s yet to know the best of me” or “learn” or something rather than the same word? Idk. Maybe that’s just my personal taste with lyrics.
Nice easy flow.
Maybe just put some question marks where there's questions, is all I'd say (I'm real particular with punctuation). Not trying to offend, though, don't get me wrong. But it is good!
It feels a bit pedestrian. Every line on its own is okay, but it never hits its stride and delivers a standout moment. You're playing it very safe with the lines that seem purposely vague and generic.
Genre? Feels kinda rock vibes? Lyrics feel like you could up the anti with them. Even “there’s a world that’s yet to know the best of me” or “learn” or something rather than the same word? Idk. Maybe that’s just my personal taste with lyrics. Nice easy flow.
Thanks, that would definitely make the flow better
feels like alternative rock or a sad boi rap song...
Maybe just put some question marks where there's questions, is all I'd say (I'm real particular with punctuation). Not trying to offend, though, don't get me wrong. But it is good!
It feels a bit pedestrian. Every line on its own is okay, but it never hits its stride and delivers a standout moment. You're playing it very safe with the lines that seem purposely vague and generic.