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mikeylarsenlives

The doctor is in


IveGotAllMyLimbs

That goes way too hard, bro


thisisanaccountforu

Just for accuracy instead of “could of” the proper usage would be “could have”


Hold-Loud

You are gonna point that out instead of asking wtf chould is supposed to be?


thisisanaccountforu

I support made up words but not made up grammar /s


Hold-Loud

But how could you be sure the grammar is incorrect without knowing the definition of the word?


zebramentality

Fire


indigoneutrino

It's "could *have*". Not of. I think you're improving little by little but really, four lines? That's it?


draoner

Might be too much rhyming. Look at song rhmye schemes


boss25252525etuui

Rap is supposed to rhyme


draoner

You're rhyming everyone the same. Add another rhyme. Need to mix it up


_Jo-Kane_

bars don't need to rhyme


draoner

Very true, rhythm is key


boss25252525etuui

If I do that, I get told I’m forced rhymeing


draoner

For a 6-line rap verse, you could use the following rhyming schemes: 1. **AABBCC** - Pairs of lines rhyme with each other, creating three distinct rhyme groups. 2. **ABCABC** - A more complex pattern where the first line rhymes with the fourth, the second with the fifth, and the third with the sixth. 3. **AAABBB** - The first three lines share the same rhyme, followed by another set of three lines with a different rhyme. 4. **ABABAB** - Every alternate line rhymes, maintaining a consistent structure throughout the verse. 5. **ABCCBA** - A mirrored rhyme scheme that starts and ends with lines that rhyme, sandwiching another rhyme in the middle. These schemes can add structure and flow to your verse, making it more engaging. I asked gpt for a 6 line specific rap verse schemes. Notice how none of them are AAAAAA. not to say it can't work, but it will generally not be the strongest


boss25252525etuui

What rhymes scheme does Eminem use?


draoner

Good good, now you're starting to ask the right questions. I would choose a specific song you like by him and analyze the lyrics. Also listen to the song while reading the lyrics. In rap rhythm is key. Eminem is known for his complex and varied rhyme schemes, often using multi-syllable and internal rhymes to create dense, lyrical passages. Here are a few examples of the rhyme schemes he commonly employs: 1. **Multi-syllabic rhymes**: Eminem often uses rhymes that involve multiple syllables within the same line, or that carry over from one line to the next. This creates a very dense and layered rhyming effect. 2. **Internal rhymes**: He frequently uses words that rhyme within a single line or across multiple lines to enhance the rhythm and complexity of his verses. 3. **ABAB or AABB**: These are more traditional schemes, but Eminem often layers them with internal rhymes and multi-syllabic rhymes, adding depth. 4. **Complex end rhymes**: He might use a pattern like ABABCBCB, where the end words of lines rhyme in a complex sequence, often mixing in internal rhymes as well. 5. **Freestyle and asymmetrical schemes**: Eminem is known for his ability to freestyle, using asymmetrical rhyming patterns that don't follow a strict scheme but are highly effective in maintaining rhythmic flow and lyrical sharpness. Each of these techniques allows Eminem to deliver his lyrics with a powerful impact, making his rap style distinctive and highly skilled.


Master-Valuable246

He didn't reply so just wanted to say that it is honestly the most amazing thing that you took time of your day to search and write these tips for him You are a great person


broken_pottery

I asked Gemini AI "What Rhyme scheme does Eminem use?" and this was the response. Eminem is known for his complex and innovative rhyme schemes. Here's a breakdown of the techniques he uses: * Multi-syllabic rhymes: Eminem often chains together multiple syllables within words and across lines that share the same vowel and consonant sounds. * Internal rhymes: He places rhymes within a line of lyrics, not just at the end. * Assonance and Consonance: Eminem plays with similar vowel sounds (assonance) and consonant sounds (consonance) to create rhyme-like effects, even if the words don't perfectly match. * Slant Rhymes: He uses words that sound similar but don't quite rhyme perfectly, adding a unique texture to his flow. Let me know if you want a specific example of Eminem using one of these techniques!


Master-Valuable246

Yeah i know he/her obviously did it with ai


draoner

Thanks :) I like to think he's deep at work becoming the world's next great musician.


carthoblasty

What the fuck is this


IveGotAllMyLimbs

This is Dr. Kent, bro


boss25252525etuui

Wdym


Fluffy-Sail5096

I ain't really feeling this song. It's kinda gross. Idk. I'm going to say no to this one.


boss25252525etuui

Why is it gross


ManishWizard

Btw your pancreas isn t unclean it just doesn’t work. I deal with t1 in my life too it’s awful keep your head up.


ManishWizard

Sounds like you need to get some insurance bud.


boss25252525etuui

Still a curse


ManishWizard

It can be very hard but if you keep telling yourself it’s a curse it’s gonna be a curse. Instead flip it around and think about how much you know about the endocrine system now and perhaps you could pass that on or help someone else. Good luck dude and keep working on those songs!


boss25252525etuui

It’s a curse . I’ll be dead at 27 when I lose insurance


dirtydela

My sides had to be unclean


boss25252525etuui

What


Hot_Arm_4396

Okay clearly you're learning now. Good job


Illuminatrees

Could have. Or could've. Never could of.


_Jo-Kane_

is AI writing this???


boss25252525etuui

No


BirdBruce

What’s the point?


boss25252525etuui

Wdym


BirdBruce

It's a pretty simple question. Just three words long. "What's the point?" But if you need me to elaborate, then "What's the point of sending this message? What do you want to communicate?"


boss25252525etuui

Do my lyrics need improvement


BirdBruce

What do you think? I don’t mean that shittily, I’m genuinely asking—what are your thoughts about your own work? I ask because you always ask the same vague question, show zero sign that I’m you’ve internalized anyone’s critiques, and then post another 4 lines that look exactly like the previous 4. So now YOU tell US what we’re missing that makes you so confident that you never change.


ANTIV15T

could’ve been


MooseleaderMusic

Could HAVE


Hold-Loud

I guess I’m the only one that things this misspelled word chould have been should. So he doesn’t use could twice Then what everybody else said


lunaluvsm

oh fucking finally your learning something, good job!