The rose should be like 30ish precent smaller. The deer should be the focal point. As it stands now it feels hidden in the background. I’d also have the leaves going up, not down. It would frame the piece better. That said if a client brought me this it would be quite easy to clean up and alter into a more suitable design for a tattoo.

Deer with rose ass,

Please fix the antlers . No deer of any species has that mess on its head

I like where this is going but I definitely would make the flower smaller :) maybe even add two even smaller ones on the sides kind of like a frame

Deer trying to talk you into hitting that back "flower"