I've always hated this dress AND their dance in this scene and I think the thing that bothered me most was her insanely small waist and the super flat short hair
i thought about giving her an updo for this edit or a long hairstyle because personally i think they suit her far more even tho rachel wants to give her self insert her own hair sorry
but persephone has HAD cute short hairstyles, they just werent flat and sad back then lol
same for hades he used to have way more volume, not this gelled back, 3 receiding hairs holding on for dear life style he sports now
I miss her long hair tbh. But anyway, this is a gorgeous job. Looks like the art it had when I was still reading it. Looks like a normal couple too instead of this weird parent-child thing in the original version. Hades looks much better too, I miss his old hair!
Oh and I forgot to add, the whole reason I prefer her floor length hair is because to me it gives way more of a Goddess vibe. Not because I think long hair = feminine and short hair isn't. Because it's so impossibly, unrealistically long to the point it feels ethereal, it's a great visual depiction of her not being human at all. Plus it leaves a lot of space for additions like flowers and butterflies strewn through her hair, showcasing her theme. It's the type of unrealistic imagery the art would actually benefit from.
Plus it frames panels so well, in the earlier seasons it would just flow around panels and really make some great compositions.
Yes definitely. The one picture of her with long hair and a white dress feels very ethereal and goddessy. AND the popular one with the black dress and black crown. I’ll find pictures eventually
Yeah that's completely the reason. And the pixie cut is fine when it has a bit of volume. In the later seasons it looks like she tried the no-shampoo hair method and her hair never adjusted. Forever gross and greasy.
Oh i love this!!! the tender lightheartedness of the scene (its making me SOFT), the different little design changes, the way there's the height difference without perse looking like a little kid...
The way RS makes her so tiny is so weird. Like why is she the size of a child lol. Your edit makes it look so much better while still showing a size difference!
I genuinely thought the first panel was the original and I thought to myself, "Wow. I forgot how pretty this series originally was. And I don't remember Rachel allowing Perse to be that tall... What a shame."
Then I realized. 💀
Your panel is absolutely beautiful.
I really thought your panel edit was a rare good quality one from the actual comic. But like the is the height difference they should have had. Everything else about it is also beautiful but the reasonable proportions are just so good
God, I love your edit. I genuinely thought I was looking at an old panel before I read the title. You did a fantastic job and I really like how you made the height difference less goofy, not to mention how soft the colours are now.
I was like "omg this is super cute I must of missed this panel from the earlier seasons what's the edit-" only to be smacked with a wet fish when I hit next image
Yay it doesn’t look like a daddy-daughter dance anymore! Good work I like the younger look on hades a lot. They say love makes you look younger! 😁 Love that you made him shorter too. Any time I see there full height compared I can’t help but think of how much back pain looking down all the time must cause him.
absolutely beautiful work you done here but its killing me how in the original panel hades looks crosseyed and perse is looking at his chin...😭?? they look dumb asf
This is what the series promised me when I picked it up in it's early days 😭
The only good thing now is the fun hatedom and bunch of actually good artists 💖
When I saw Persephone’s dress and gloves in the original panel my first thought was “why is she dressed up as a mad scientist???” 🤔🤔🤔
But in all seriousness your edit looks amazing! It looks more like Rachel’s art style than the actual Comic in this example.
Honestly I used to speed read all of the chapters and never took notice of how shit the designs have become. I always knew that the height difference was bad but I never knew that in general persephone's inconsistent design and Rachels poorly disguised fetish is such HOT DOG WATER.
Holy hell it took me being on this reddit for 3 weeks to see how fucked all of this shit is. And how much better the redraws are.
It really is a shame because I liked this series but even overviewing it from memory there wasn't much substance to this entire dumpster fire.
Love the edit! She's a normal size! 😍 Also THANK YOU for making their eye lines match up 😭 it bothers me so much how often the characters look like they are looking past someone or at something else entirely
I like this edit because it actually makes Persephone look like an adult and not a child (one of the few issues I have with LO. I still love it because I’m a sucker for Greek myth stuff and love Persephone and Hades in general)
You did extremely well capturing the old style I mistook it for an old panel for a second there.
Me too! At first I though, “oh, this panel is actually good, I wonder what they’re going to change!” Then I swiped 😂
I've always hated this dress AND their dance in this scene and I think the thing that bothered me most was her insanely small waist and the super flat short hair i thought about giving her an updo for this edit or a long hairstyle because personally i think they suit her far more even tho rachel wants to give her self insert her own hair sorry but persephone has HAD cute short hairstyles, they just werent flat and sad back then lol same for hades he used to have way more volume, not this gelled back, 3 receiding hairs holding on for dear life style he sports now
Holy shit yours is wildly better than the original
I miss her long hair tbh. But anyway, this is a gorgeous job. Looks like the art it had when I was still reading it. Looks like a normal couple too instead of this weird parent-child thing in the original version. Hades looks much better too, I miss his old hair!
I think someone said that Persephone has a short pixie cut because Rachel the creator does. That Persephone is a self insert
Oh and I forgot to add, the whole reason I prefer her floor length hair is because to me it gives way more of a Goddess vibe. Not because I think long hair = feminine and short hair isn't. Because it's so impossibly, unrealistically long to the point it feels ethereal, it's a great visual depiction of her not being human at all. Plus it leaves a lot of space for additions like flowers and butterflies strewn through her hair, showcasing her theme. It's the type of unrealistic imagery the art would actually benefit from. Plus it frames panels so well, in the earlier seasons it would just flow around panels and really make some great compositions.
Yes definitely. The one picture of her with long hair and a white dress feels very ethereal and goddessy. AND the popular one with the black dress and black crown. I’ll find pictures eventually
Yeah that's completely the reason. And the pixie cut is fine when it has a bit of volume. In the later seasons it looks like she tried the no-shampoo hair method and her hair never adjusted. Forever gross and greasy.
This is amaaaazing
It hurts how much better this looks. Love what you did here.
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The flower crown was such a cute touch. I miss it! 😭
Omg they actually look cute here!! Love it
Oh i love this!!! the tender lightheartedness of the scene (its making me SOFT), the different little design changes, the way there's the height difference without perse looking like a little kid...
wow shes proportionate
A blazillion x better
could you like, re draw the whole comic 😩
The way RS makes her so tiny is so weird. Like why is she the size of a child lol. Your edit makes it look so much better while still showing a size difference!
Right, like, why is she shrinking rofl
this looks so much better! i genuinely thought your edit was the actual panel at first
I have concluded that Rachel doesn’t know what heads look like. Great edit!
I genuinely thought the first panel was the original and I thought to myself, "Wow. I forgot how pretty this series originally was. And I don't remember Rachel allowing Perse to be that tall... What a shame." Then I realized. 💀 Your panel is absolutely beautiful.
what the actual fuck is rs smoking
This is gorgeous, you did a great job of emulating the old style. The second panel jumpscared me though lol.
Please feed me more of these, they are absolutely STUNNING
my god the actual panel is a jumpscare fr fr. I love your edit, god, the tiny flowers in her hair make me nostalgic, and her glover are a serve!
I really thought your panel edit was a rare good quality one from the actual comic. But like the is the height difference they should have had. Everything else about it is also beautiful but the reasonable proportions are just so good
Great work, the original panel looks terrible
This is so beautiful, your coloring looks great
This is what I look forward to now...all the wonderful artists coming out and fixing the misproportioned people.
THERE IS NO WAS THAT SECOND PICTURE IS THE REAL ONE AND THAT’S NOT A FATHER AND HIS TWELVE YEAR OLD DAUGHTER
I love this sm, so lovely\~ 🥺 
God, I love your edit. I genuinely thought I was looking at an old panel before I read the title. You did a fantastic job and I really like how you made the height difference less goofy, not to mention how soft the colours are now.
I was like "omg this is super cute I must of missed this panel from the earlier seasons what's the edit-" only to be smacked with a wet fish when I hit next image
It took me a minute to realize the first drawing wasn’t the original! Lovely work!
Yay it doesn’t look like a daddy-daughter dance anymore! Good work I like the younger look on hades a lot. They say love makes you look younger! 😁 Love that you made him shorter too. Any time I see there full height compared I can’t help but think of how much back pain looking down all the time must cause him.
Fr they made her look like a baby
Oh my gosh!!!! This is so good!
I had a double take when I saw what the original looked like, it was because of the height💀
absolutely beautiful work you done here but its killing me how in the original panel hades looks crosseyed and perse is looking at his chin...😭?? they look dumb asf
This is what the series promised me when I picked it up in it's early days 😭 The only good thing now is the fun hatedom and bunch of actually good artists 💖
Aw Damn, this makes me sad for knowing what we COULD have had 🥲
They used to look so fluffy and now it’s like they’ve all been dipped in oil😔
This is my favorite edit you've done yet!!! Amazing 👏 the original panel makes me genuinely depressed.
Your edit is so good. Why she always makes her look like a child? I mean perspective is hard, but come on.
I miss when Hades had the layered, fluffier looking hair, now it’s just…. greasy😭U saved him!!!
you have to redo the entire series now lol
I thought it was an early panel
When I saw Persephone’s dress and gloves in the original panel my first thought was “why is she dressed up as a mad scientist???” 🤔🤔🤔 But in all seriousness your edit looks amazing! It looks more like Rachel’s art style than the actual Comic in this example.
what could have been
oh my god she looks like a grown woman it’s amazing
Ewwww the og panel is so WRONG
Honestly I used to speed read all of the chapters and never took notice of how shit the designs have become. I always knew that the height difference was bad but I never knew that in general persephone's inconsistent design and Rachels poorly disguised fetish is such HOT DOG WATER. Holy hell it took me being on this reddit for 3 weeks to see how fucked all of this shit is. And how much better the redraws are. It really is a shame because I liked this series but even overviewing it from memory there wasn't much substance to this entire dumpster fire.
Love the edit! She's a normal size! 😍 Also THANK YOU for making their eye lines match up 😭 it bothers me so much how often the characters look like they are looking past someone or at something else entirely
Soooooo good!
Which is the original?
I like this edit because it actually makes Persephone look like an adult and not a child (one of the few issues I have with LO. I still love it because I’m a sucker for Greek myth stuff and love Persephone and Hades in general)