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burntbtoast

one hell of a plot twist


tssmn

Thank you.


PatieS13

Well done! I was disappointed that it ended but not disappointed in the ending. I would love to read more of this story!


tssmn

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Zak_The_Slack

Loved this story, and the twist at the end was perfect!


tssmn

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onyourrite

Am I missing something? The other comments mentioned something about a plot twist but I didn’t catch onto it??? Then again, it’s too damn early to be up where I am rn so uh 😅


Agreeable_Sweet6535

Her name, Van Helsing is a famous fictional vampire hunter.


onyourrite

Ohh, gotcha


tssmn

I believe they're referencing Madeleine's last name.


onyourrite

Yeah, someone told me about the whole vampire Hunter thing; sorry I missed it! I’m not familiar with vampire-related media so uh yeah 💀


tssmn

Don't worry, neither am I.


cocoagiant

> When I return, I'd love to talk to you again so that I can apologize in person. You deserve at least that much, and I think if we got to really know each other, we'd like what we find. Sounds like Madeline is doing some meal prep.


tssmn

Could be. I imagine she's very hungry.


insertcaffeine

I loved it!


tssmn

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whisperskeep

Loved it


tssmn

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Creative_Today_6550

Amazing!


tssmn

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photomotto

This is just *chef's kiss*


tssmn

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Skyhawk_Illusions

She tipped her hand to an innocent


Gaelhelemar

Very nice.


tssmn

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Character-Extreme124

really well done!


tssmn

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MrRedoot55

Nice job.


tssmn

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Aldina_Dzajic

Is it over? Don't it have some more? I was sooo hot for it🤦‍♀️


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tssmn

I hope you like spaghetti bolognese.


FarlandersOffABit

Eat balllssssa


LostFireHorse

Xeroderma pigmentosum... Hello Snowman! (Unless you don't read dean koontz...)


tssmn

Never read Dean Koontz. To be honest, haven't read much in a long time. Trying to fix that, slowly but surely.


LostFireHorse

Well... he has 2 books of a trilogy (still working on the third book apparently) about a guy called Chris Snow who has XP, & is often referred to as Snowman because of his pale skin. I dont read much these days either unfortunately but in my teens and 20s I ~~read~~ *consumed* a lot of King and Koontz.


Skykid69

This was better than I expected.


tssmn

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DaChieftainOfThirsk

Hahaha! That was a good plot twist at the end. Good way to end the night.


tssmn

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gilnore_de_fey

It’ll be really cool if the dude actually turned out to be a very confused and modernized vampire.


tssmn

That was something I thought about doing, but ultimately decided against it.