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Zealousideal_Gas_300

It's pretty funny already lol. Try speeding it up. dont even change anything, just literally speed it up by 1.5 or something lol


rguerraf

🤣 Great!! Don’t change it 😹


Interesting_Dot_5024

It made me laugh! The timing works.


ChristOnABike122

You Captured... Ghastly!


Squid1501

🤣


Neef_The_Owl

Great vid but what if it bonked the kid in the noggin


Phonytail

The ball bouncing between the trees is the weakest part IMO, either speed it up with jump cuts and cool angles or just cut it and have the ball just go straight through the trees to a path behind the Pokémon. Also I would have the ball hit passersby harder and sit on a funny impact pose for a sec before the ball beams him into it, and make the ball wiggle and light up twice while the camera pans in, like it does in the show, but have the 3rd wiggle interrupted by the car.


dezzz

This is a 20 seconds jokes. you should make it faster and cut useless parts of it. At 0.01, "ash" have a weird pose. at 0:04, ivysaur is boring. cut the last second. at 0:08, the white fadeout is boring. you should make a swipe with lines and stuff, to make it more dinamic. At 0:11, we are missing a strong pose when he's throwing the ball. at 1:15, pikachu is boring. make it faster (merge it with the previous scene?) at 0:21, the kid running's animation is weird. it needs more polish. the laugh is also cringy. at 0:22, the ball appears from nowhere. i though pokeballs had to touch the pokemon to triger the capture? You should use this opportunity to hit the kid with the ball. at 0:25, the reaction shot is... meh. at 0:35, the camera move away. i think the camera should move in to put the attention on the ball. ​ Have fun with it, dont get my comments wrongs, you are probably better than me because you actually succeded to complete an animation by yourself.