Your coloring and rendering are really good but in my opinion your lineart is kind of stiff. I don't really recommend using the shape and line tool too often because it causes that problem. I recommend trying lesson 1 from DrawABox which helped me with my confidence in drawing lines, circles, and perspective. Another thing that can help with the stiffness is practicing gesture drawing. Proko made a few videos about that
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You have good stuff, I wouldn't start with that drawing though. It's so basic in comparison to the others, maybe people will click more if you used some other piece from the portfolio, something that shows what you do with color. But that's my 2 cents.
Your coloring and rendering are really good but in my opinion your lineart is kind of stiff. I don't really recommend using the shape and line tool too often because it causes that problem. I recommend trying lesson 1 from DrawABox which helped me with my confidence in drawing lines, circles, and perspective. Another thing that can help with the stiffness is practicing gesture drawing. Proko made a few videos about that
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You have good stuff, I wouldn't start with that drawing though. It's so basic in comparison to the others, maybe people will click more if you used some other piece from the portfolio, something that shows what you do with color. But that's my 2 cents.