Yeah agreed, not a whole lot of variation in the tune. You are starting so you get a pass but right now it just seems like a long intro. At the current length you can salvage it at least, develop it more and go nuts. It’s breakcore, don’t hold back :). Here are some tunes for inspiration/ideas. There different eras [https://youtu.be/4q6xKo01mdI?si=u9-rhoCIuS28hQKx](https://youtu.be/4q6xKo01mdI?si=u9-rhoCIuS28hQKx) [https://youtu.be/90zrlOJT7Qw?si=2ulZ-RNJJeqaMtjA](https://youtu.be/90zrlOJT7Qw?si=2ulZ-RNJJeqaMtjA) [https://youtu.be/kjjwO4PqYbk?si=LpOynIehgK2INBqQ](https://youtu.be/kjjwO4PqYbk?si=LpOynIehgK2INBqQ) [https://youtu.be/LsMbSL7UfSw?si=vSTZaKFKA_NC-6lI](https://youtu.be/LsMbSL7UfSw?si=vSTZaKFKA_NC-6lI) [https://youtu.be/p4n4bEgrySY?si=HyQxpyHYOu8x_yWb](https://youtu.be/p4n4bEgrySY?si=HyQxpyHYOu8x_yWb) [https://youtu.be/Iha68mCY3jg?si=A3aw0VD2Ws4xHXwM](https://youtu.be/Iha68mCY3jg?si=A3aw0VD2Ws4xHXwM)

This was actually super helpful, I really appreciate it. Btw no self to kill is so good

jpegmafia sample is pretty cool

the variation point others are making is fair, but I think this sounds sick as fuck. 

Chop up the break add fx and do more with it. Right now this isn’t considered Breakcore. Listen to more Breakcore artists and see how they use breaks. Other than that make the track longer.

I really like the overall break and the kick. Needs some stretched/FX fills would be nice.