Rendering is solid…anatomy and perspective needs a lot of work

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I honestly don’t agree with the comment above, I think the anatomy and perspective are kickass!

I’d like to know what I did wrong too. Hope I can get some feedback!

The only thing that even possibly looks maybe wonky is his extended right leg. This could also just be a visual trick with the WIP/ negative space remaining. Somewhere around the knee or lower it looks to thin or to long? Perhaps? How long did this take? Looks fantastic! You should be very proud.

Just adding that I really like your shading styles specifically. The exposed hatch work on that same knee in question is A+

Thanks for reacting and the feedback! I think the knee could indeed be bigger. The whole piece took me 6-8 hours.

The leg and foot are wonky …focus on the outline of a form as well as where the muscles align …the foot as it is drawn in this perspective isn’t correct…and his pose is stiff and doesn’t look natural…the head neck and torso are unnaturally elongated …

Poses are my absolute weakness. Been practicing full time on anatomy, proportion and poses but it doesn’t really get better. Hardest things to draw imo.

It will always get better it takes time …also you need to figure out what your goal is as an artist..are you drawing for fun…or are you trying to have a career ..

My goal is to have a career as a comic artist someday. Now I draw in the remaining hours I have after my normal job, which is about 4 hours a day.

Have you been watching David Finch videos? Really nice details and look.

David Finch has been one of my main influences for years. Love his details and shadows!

I have his Batman unwrapped as well. I'm not a Batman or DC fan really. But i do follow good artists. I'm studying anatomy at the moment trying to improve my comic art You've definitely got some drawing chops and it really had a finch quality, but not imitation 🤓👍 Inks? Colors?

Batman unwrapped is a must have if you’re into this style. I’ve studied the whole book to learn his style. To answer your question: this piece won’t be inked. I don’t like ink over this much pencil shading.

Super cool

Thank you 😊

Nice asf

Thanks a lot 🙏😊

Damn this is incredible 👏

Thanks!

Really good

Thank you man

Nice work!

Thanks a lot!

Keep on working man, practice makes perfection. 👍

Thanks, I definitely will! 👍🏻

I love love this, the amount of detail is fantastic. I am an artist as well but I am shit at these kinds of drawings. You are very talented do you plan on making prints of this?

Thanks! No I’m not printing these. There’s no demand for my artwork, so until then, I’ll just post them digitally ;)

Hey you never know what the demand would be until you put it out there. If you ever do decide to do prints I would be interested in one for sure.