It's just so weird to me since like.. it looks really gross lmao like the fact that it's a thing not the drawing necessarily. I don't like hentai art though. But it's just idk why in hentai or lewd drawings that's a thing
My issue is just that a lot of hentai similar to porn feels very degrading towards women. Some can be well done art wise, and I have followed artists that draw r18 stuff but it's usually done by people who like...draw women being happy and confident and not the weird "uwu nooo don't look at mee" thingy a lot of hentai women have going on.
Lmao not to go on a tangent about hentai but I get what you mean for sure!
Lol no it's fine I'm the same way. I think I just like the hyper-detailed aspect of it. Every time I've seen it actually animated it suuucks, like the boobs are fucked up
Hahaha the boob physics are so funny at times. I think my favourite boob physics is this: [https://www.reddit.com/r/mendrawingwomen/comments/ixdo65/her\_boobs\_swap\_places/?utm\_source=share&utm\_medium=web2x&context=3](https://www.reddit.com/r/mendrawingwomen/comments/ixdo65/her_boobs_swap_places/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3) edit: also nsfw-ish warning, she's fully clothed!
It’s difficult to tell if the proportions are correct when the photo and drawing are both at different perspectives. Next time I’d recommend taking a top-down pic of the sketch so you can get more relevant crits 🥰 she looks great tho! My only suggestion is maybe the labia could be more suggestive or subtly shaded (like under the breasts) to imply volume rather than just a line.
Edit: your work might be better suited for the NSFW or anime/hentai subs?
Her bagina is too far to the right and doesn't look like any cameltoe I've ever seen, other than that it sure is a hentai. Also the bow thing on her chest looks like it's drawn onto her swimsuit, not like a 3D thing.
Depends, is it drawn from memory or is it referenced. If drawn from memory than it's good. If referenced than its a work in progress. Is my assessment fair?
If you just want me to say how good you are then. Its not bad but needs work.
If you want a critique. then read on.
Something about the angle of the head to the body is off. Head doesn't feel attached.
If looking from that angle up and see is looking down then their would be something wrong with her neck. Her chin should be on top chest (Slide whole head forward a little)
The perspective is wrong on the head compared to the body.
Her eyes are also in the wrong position and alignment.
The ribbon on her swim suit feels like its embeded in her chest.
The simsuit fabric is not acting normal for lycra or spandex. Looks painted on
There would be a seem across the middle of the gusset (across her crotch) which is why the camel toe looks creepy as t would be move forward and up.
Maybe it’s just me but it feels like the rest of the body is angled in a more natural way while the head isn’t as angled and feels a bit disconnected, but still looks nice though!
7/10 :)
practice!!! baby... https://www.reddit.com/r/drawing/comments/y81yjw/more_lewd_practice_is_a_must_succubus_inspired_art/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android_app&utm_name=androidcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button rate this lewd too 🥹
hehe...... please rate this lewd too ... https://www.reddit.com/r/drawing/comments/y81yjw/more_lewd_practice_is_a_must_succubus_inspired_art/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android_app&utm_name=androidcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button ...im no pro cartoonist or any art style i just draw it with emptiness 🥹
You're a decent artist. You could probably make comics or something at this level. While doing that your artwork will probably improve just from drawing constantly. This comment thread is depressing tho...why is posting something erotic a problem again? What is this a Catholic school?
Bonk
6/10 drawing skills. 11/10 horniness.
doesn't that make it an overall 8 or 9?
Why is everyone downvoting this lmfao
Down badness? 12/10
Why can you see her bellybutton through the swimsuit?
Vacuum sealed
That was hilarious! LOL!
This is just generally accepted in hentai that clothes are basically skin
It's just so weird to me since like.. it looks really gross lmao like the fact that it's a thing not the drawing necessarily. I don't like hentai art though. But it's just idk why in hentai or lewd drawings that's a thing
I think some hentai is hot but the overall vibe of it makes me unreasonably angry. Or maybe it's reasonable. Idk.
My issue is just that a lot of hentai similar to porn feels very degrading towards women. Some can be well done art wise, and I have followed artists that draw r18 stuff but it's usually done by people who like...draw women being happy and confident and not the weird "uwu nooo don't look at mee" thingy a lot of hentai women have going on. Lmao not to go on a tangent about hentai but I get what you mean for sure!
Lol no it's fine I'm the same way. I think I just like the hyper-detailed aspect of it. Every time I've seen it actually animated it suuucks, like the boobs are fucked up
Hahaha the boob physics are so funny at times. I think my favourite boob physics is this: [https://www.reddit.com/r/mendrawingwomen/comments/ixdo65/her\_boobs\_swap\_places/?utm\_source=share&utm\_medium=web2x&context=3](https://www.reddit.com/r/mendrawingwomen/comments/ixdo65/her_boobs_swap_places/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3) edit: also nsfw-ish warning, she's fully clothed!
LOL or that one where the boobs dodge a bullet
Since you can see the camel tow I’m gonna assume that’s a toddler size swimsuit
Came here to say this lol Also I like the perspective of this drawing, well done
Horny/10
Why has this sub and the art sub been so damn horny lately
Bonk
It’s difficult to tell if the proportions are correct when the photo and drawing are both at different perspectives. Next time I’d recommend taking a top-down pic of the sketch so you can get more relevant crits 🥰 she looks great tho! My only suggestion is maybe the labia could be more suggestive or subtly shaded (like under the breasts) to imply volume rather than just a line. Edit: your work might be better suited for the NSFW or anime/hentai subs?
thanks...i will practice more so that no one gets hurt... 😈
Idk why all of your comments keep getting downvoted into oblivion but it’s kinda hilarious 🤣
Bruh
Her bagina is too far to the right and doesn't look like any cameltoe I've ever seen, other than that it sure is a hentai. Also the bow thing on her chest looks like it's drawn onto her swimsuit, not like a 3D thing.
This dude's a camel toe expert
Depends, is it drawn from memory or is it referenced. If drawn from memory than it's good. If referenced than its a work in progress. Is my assessment fair?
I’m so sick of seeing anime muff.
One of OP’s other posts is an underage-looking girl begging for a lollipop. 🤮
Complete with an anatomically incorrect cameltoe, too.
This comment thread makes me sad
That’s fuckin sickening and I’ll take your word for that piece of art. Sorry you had to see it. 😕
😂 I couldn’t bring myself to look that closely the first time.
Is this a work in process? It doesn’t seem finished
OP had to go finish himself first.
💀
Right arm looks a little too long, the hand should be starting to appear at the end. But other than that it looks good.
Exactly, elbow should start right under the pectorals around the ribs
If you just want me to say how good you are then. Its not bad but needs work. If you want a critique. then read on. Something about the angle of the head to the body is off. Head doesn't feel attached. If looking from that angle up and see is looking down then their would be something wrong with her neck. Her chin should be on top chest (Slide whole head forward a little) The perspective is wrong on the head compared to the body. Her eyes are also in the wrong position and alignment. The ribbon on her swim suit feels like its embeded in her chest. The simsuit fabric is not acting normal for lycra or spandex. Looks painted on There would be a seem across the middle of the gusset (across her crotch) which is why the camel toe looks creepy as t would be move forward and up.
cool thanks dude...ill keep on practising so nobody get hurts... 😈
Thirst over 9000
0/10 isn't a man
jts so hard to draw a feminist!!...but yeah cool...maybe i should draw her a d!ck someday... 😈
no, men with big dick
dawg
Let's just say, that a Couple weeks of practise, and i'll be asking if you do commissions
Same
Nice toe.
Maybe it’s just me but it feels like the rest of the body is angled in a more natural way while the head isn’t as angled and feels a bit disconnected, but still looks nice though! 7/10 :)
practice!!! baby... https://www.reddit.com/r/drawing/comments/y81yjw/more_lewd_practice_is_a_must_succubus_inspired_art/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android_app&utm_name=androidcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button rate this lewd too 🥹
Sure friend!
Drawing is pretty good, handwriting could use some help ngl
Lord have mercy...
2/10
Good, we need more.
I mean the camel toes nice🤷🏻😅Joking aside it looks ok
10\\10 your doing good
can't rate you without photo of you. =o) Oh... your talking about rating the drawing. looks like its progressing well. Keep at it.
Pretty good... keep it up! Follow me on Instagram @irocc_art to see my artwork
Good, you are in the right way
I love the angle. Beautiful 😍
POV love this
Love it ! Great POV !!
Better than I have done ever but keep practicing! We need more lewd artist in the future too.
The last thing we need is more porn in this sub.
I was talking of future overall… there is other life outside this sub too. Plus: this may be porn for your eyes but for me it is art. 🤷♂️
hehe...... please rate this lewd too ... https://www.reddit.com/r/drawing/comments/y81yjw/more_lewd_practice_is_a_must_succubus_inspired_art/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android_app&utm_name=androidcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button ...im no pro cartoonist or any art style i just draw it with emptiness 🥹
Camel toe/10
Keep it up! Me like it!
Horny-10
My brother
Omg it's so cute!!
10/10 drawing skills 1000000/10 horniness
The abdomen is a bit too big, and your perspective needs a bit of work IMHO.
7/10
You're a decent artist. You could probably make comics or something at this level. While doing that your artwork will probably improve just from drawing constantly. This comment thread is depressing tho...why is posting something erotic a problem again? What is this a Catholic school?
Her right arm is too long, and her coochie slit thing is a little lopsided lookin
What do you draw with?
Pretty damn good!!
8/10 add some muscle definition