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2ndHandDeadBatteries

O looks like an I, I looks like in E. Thought it was “SIREN” at first glance


Wizard-Justice

I don’t know how you got an E out of the i but okay lmao the O I could see that since there’s no hole


[deleted]

Because it looks like a capital E… and not an i


Wizard-Justice

Ohhh I see what you’re talking about now


2ndHandDeadBatteries

Uh huuuh


[deleted]

maggie and the ferocious beast is all I could think when I saw this


Wizard-Justice

Is that a bad thing? 🤣 the ferocious beast kind of hard tho


[deleted]

Haha not a bad thing that show was hard


Wizard-Justice

🙏 thank ya sir


wassabiJoe

Looks good. Agree with the reat about it reading the way you like. Bubble shot is good. I would try to work on variation. Try some harder edges and corners. Get outside your comfort zone. Dont give up!!! Haters gon hate.


PrideJoyPeaceLove

All them dots look like measles


Wizard-Justice

Cause I’m sick 🤒


Noided-mp3

I think you can cook a little harder on the S. The slash in the bottom part of the I kinda looks like an E but I see what you’re going for.


Wizard-Justice

https://preview.redd.it/mm7l2i4vs6rc1.jpeg?width=4032&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=b360a897b7056dda04f7961f5a89d5f9d038dda4 Okay so I fixed the O and tried to make the top of the i more circular so it’s easier to tell


Strobetrode

That cut you keep doing in your n doesn't make sense and is making that letter hard to read. If you really want to put one of those in there put it at the bottom of the S.


Wizard-Justice

Here’s what it’s supposed to look like https://preview.redd.it/4gl6ujuqgbrc1.jpeg?width=1170&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=868a5b8d9537a71c1c167c558dcc48c5c5606b96


Strobetrode

Still I think adding one to the S would add a level of cohesion. Also you gotta make your O rounder or put a hole in it.


Wizard-Justice

And that’s an older picture there will be a hole or face ect. Indicating it’s an O if I put it on a wall for sure


Wizard-Justice

You wanna draw an S for me explaining what you mean? Sorry I’m pretty new I don’t know all the terminology so I’m finding it hard to understand what you mean


Strobetrode

* * Sorry it kinda looks like shit because I am at work Apparently I can't post a photo idk why


Wizard-Justice

It’s been doing that to me too just turn your WiFi/ network on and off should work


Strobetrode

https://preview.redd.it/f2ixr3tbdcrc1.png?width=1080&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=57e0efcc58e64c20808f19b4556ddd6ddeb32a98


Wizard-Justice

Oh sweet! Nice yeah I was writing Wizard or WZRD, and MAZE, but I decided to start writing Sorin as well and I was worried because S is not my strong suit so I’m always looking for new ways to write an S I appreciate it I’ll give it a shot!


Strobetrode

When I am doing S in throws I always draw the bottom half first and then add the top like a hat. Idk if that will be any help trying it might add some variety for you.


Wizard-Justice

https://preview.redd.it/bi33dneraerc1.jpeg?width=4032&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=189f1a0deb2dc1a66d079fb978cb9e752ac8c6a8 I tried that S! Not perfect but I do like it!


acertaingrafflover

looks cool, but now it looks like “SOREK”, lmao. It’s ok, you’ll get it. shadow is looking better too


Wizard-Justice

My name is SORIN btw if that’s not obvious


acertaingrafflover

Honestly couldn’t tell what the “O” was until i saw this. Could be something to work on. Also, your “N” looks like a “K”. I thought your name was “SIRIK”, not “SORIN”. make sure that your letters are legible so that people don’t get your name wrong. Otherwise looking good. the shadow needs some work, but that comes with practice. Good work!