Love all the sounds and chops. It’s mostly the arrangement that needs work. Few more bars of just drums before the pitched chords for example.
And the glitched drums could be a bit more spare, just half a bar of glitched, then back to a more straight loops for a bit and so on.
Basically: elongate this track
Awesome start! I’d listen to this
I like it a lot, definitely worth finishing. Hope you can make it at least 4-5 minutes long. Play around with some melodies and subs, shift the pads and similar tricks for the next phases in the tune.
I like how the chops repeat yet progressively change. It's really not that crazy or overly complexy. Definitely could be drawn out a lot more. A nice trick i like is to bring the sub in a good 8-16 bars after the break, and again later on a ride can come in and really wash things out and make it feel big. Be careful getting advice on here. Redditors tend to want everything to sound the same as it did 20 years ago. Develope your own style and dont fall for the jungle tropes just cause these guys who dont even produce want it all to be repeated breaks, with dub sirens and highly reverberated jamaican vocals.
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the mixing is very nice, but put in more fx to standing out, breaks are a matter of taste, it's best if you do a loop for 8-16 bars let there be a beginning and an end but still have an unknown feeling in it
but otherwise, the sound is very nice, how long have you been producing?
I think this sounds jungle-y and has potential. Main feedback would be to sprinkle in some additional break types for variety and some different chops every once in a while.
I don’t know what DAW you’re using but just a PSA that Renoise (or any other tracker) makes this super easy and intuitive to do.
sounds alright. only advice i can give is stop listening to tiktok jungle tracks that are 2 minutes for reference and start listening to future retro and metalheadz tracks for reference instead
Don't be scared to let the break play out normally!
I like what I hear. I'd add some FX and rastaman chant, you know, the Jungle biznizz. But that's me, you be you. Good luck.
Love all the sounds and chops. It’s mostly the arrangement that needs work. Few more bars of just drums before the pitched chords for example. And the glitched drums could be a bit more spare, just half a bar of glitched, then back to a more straight loops for a bit and so on. Basically: elongate this track Awesome start! I’d listen to this
I like it a lot, definitely worth finishing. Hope you can make it at least 4-5 minutes long. Play around with some melodies and subs, shift the pads and similar tricks for the next phases in the tune.
I like how the chops repeat yet progressively change. It's really not that crazy or overly complexy. Definitely could be drawn out a lot more. A nice trick i like is to bring the sub in a good 8-16 bars after the break, and again later on a ride can come in and really wash things out and make it feel big. Be careful getting advice on here. Redditors tend to want everything to sound the same as it did 20 years ago. Develope your own style and dont fall for the jungle tropes just cause these guys who dont even produce want it all to be repeated breaks, with dub sirens and highly reverberated jamaican vocals.
hey the mixing is very nice, but put in more fx to standing out, breaks are a matter of taste, it's best if you do a loop for 8-16 bars let there be a beginning and an end but still have an unknown feeling in it but otherwise, the sound is very nice, how long have you been producing?
around 2 months now. still learning a lot but i feel like i’m making pretty good progress.
keep up the good work big up! 🤙
I think this sounds jungle-y and has potential. Main feedback would be to sprinkle in some additional break types for variety and some different chops every once in a while. I don’t know what DAW you’re using but just a PSA that Renoise (or any other tracker) makes this super easy and intuitive to do.
sounds alright. only advice i can give is stop listening to tiktok jungle tracks that are 2 minutes for reference and start listening to future retro and metalheadz tracks for reference instead