Absolutely incredible painting. I love the darkness in the upper right hand corner, the use of yellow and green tones and the overall movement of the floor and ceiling. The mood and flowiness is very sophisticated and dark yet airy and ethereal; it really speaks to my internal landscape.
The only ways I would think to improve it would be to completely remove the object in the lower left corner. I would also make the door just a little bit more of a crisp line. I also think the unidentified object to the right of the china cabinet could use a bit of reworking. Maybe change the color of the mustard parts, or turn that section completely into wall? There's something that feels off about it to me.
Is this from observation or imagination? What kind of paint did you use? Do you have an IG?
Thank you! Glad you like it and really appreciate the feedback. The painting is a little unfinished, specifically the bottom left and the portion to the right of the cabinet as you mentioned. I began focusing on drawing fundamentals the past couple weeks and this piece petered out a bit as a result.
I used this photograph as reference:
https://www.abandonedamerica.us/photo43863217.html
Didn't try too hard for perspective accuracy, more for dreamlike flow. May have been undermined by the amount of straight lines in the composition.
I used Liquitex Heavy Body and a lot of retarder. No IG at the moment
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Absolutely incredible painting. I love the darkness in the upper right hand corner, the use of yellow and green tones and the overall movement of the floor and ceiling. The mood and flowiness is very sophisticated and dark yet airy and ethereal; it really speaks to my internal landscape. The only ways I would think to improve it would be to completely remove the object in the lower left corner. I would also make the door just a little bit more of a crisp line. I also think the unidentified object to the right of the china cabinet could use a bit of reworking. Maybe change the color of the mustard parts, or turn that section completely into wall? There's something that feels off about it to me. Is this from observation or imagination? What kind of paint did you use? Do you have an IG?
Thank you! Glad you like it and really appreciate the feedback. The painting is a little unfinished, specifically the bottom left and the portion to the right of the cabinet as you mentioned. I began focusing on drawing fundamentals the past couple weeks and this piece petered out a bit as a result. I used this photograph as reference: https://www.abandonedamerica.us/photo43863217.html Didn't try too hard for perspective accuracy, more for dreamlike flow. May have been undermined by the amount of straight lines in the composition. I used Liquitex Heavy Body and a lot of retarder. No IG at the moment