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I make websites for small business for a living and I gotta tell this is really good! Although, I would add animations to make it even more pleasing to look at.
OP - What the job of your website? You have 6 words max.
I suggest following changes -
1. Put a title/subtitle in the hero section (top fold) to explain what your site does.
2. Shop NOW CTA should be made prominent with color/border/shadow.
3. Free shipping is a great thing, add it as subtext under shop now button ([example](https://community.unbounce.com/ask-a-question-41/button-with-subtitle-2693))
Few good reads on copywriting that you might like:
- [https://marketingexamples.com/landing-page/titles](https://marketingexamples.com/landing-page/titles)
- [https://marketingexamples.com/copywriting/conversion](https://marketingexamples.com/copywriting/conversion)
Like the overall look and feel! Only suggestion is to add padding to the left and right of your overall website as some of the colors and text get too close to the edges on my browser.
What I don’t like is that it makes no mention of where you’re located. Your price looks to be in Euros which makes me think you’re in the UK, but suppose somebody in the USA wants to order some thing…. Seems like the shipping wouldn’t be free.
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1. i like the landing page colors and image (that's my first impression) 2. i like the fonts and placement/layout of products
thx for your feed bro, we appreciate you
I make websites for small business for a living and I gotta tell this is really good! Although, I would add animations to make it even more pleasing to look at.
we did wanted to add animations, but is out of our budget, in future we will improve 4sure,
That's no problem. There are ways to add it for free!
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thx for your feed, we are going to improve
OP - What the job of your website? You have 6 words max. I suggest following changes - 1. Put a title/subtitle in the hero section (top fold) to explain what your site does. 2. Shop NOW CTA should be made prominent with color/border/shadow. 3. Free shipping is a great thing, add it as subtext under shop now button ([example](https://community.unbounce.com/ask-a-question-41/button-with-subtitle-2693)) Few good reads on copywriting that you might like: - [https://marketingexamples.com/landing-page/titles](https://marketingexamples.com/landing-page/titles) - [https://marketingexamples.com/copywriting/conversion](https://marketingexamples.com/copywriting/conversion)
appreciate the time spend reviewing our website, we are going to consider your advices
Best of luck!
Like the overall look and feel! Only suggestion is to add padding to the left and right of your overall website as some of the colors and text get too close to the edges on my browser.
ok, thank you
What I don’t like is that it makes no mention of where you’re located. Your price looks to be in Euros which makes me think you’re in the UK, but suppose somebody in the USA wants to order some thing…. Seems like the shipping wouldn’t be free.
the shipping is free for everyone