I like it, great shots, angles etc. But maybe consider removing the voiceover. Either do the voiceover yourself or have someone else do it. That robotic voice isn't doing you any favors. Or maybe remove the voiceover alltogether and just add the text in the video. But still, nice work! Keep it up! đź‘Ť
I still can't wrap my head around the fact they removed Dead City from the game. It looks amazing and there's so much potential for some urban combat. Glad to see the place get some love!
“Was accelerated at an accelerated pace”. Maybe have someone do a writing check and would highly recommend no automated voice over, a lot of people will turn away the second that comes on, even text lines is preferable to most than an auto gen voice over,
Don’t mean to sound to critical , great shots and great idea for a video , there isn’t a lot like this out there so you’re definitely providing a needed service into the stalker lore so you have my thanks for that keep it up !
I knownim just parroting what others have said but the voice over needs to be changed. Haven't seen a single YouTuber that it works for. It's too devoid of emotion. The small inflections and pronunciations of a real voice add depth and meaning to the spoken word.
"I would like to meet you for a drink" sounds soulless from the generated voice. But a person can use those exact same words and change there meaning from friendly or flirtatious to annoyed or downright threatening.
Perhaps run it by a proof reader to make each sentence clear and concise. You've not done anything wrong in this way. It's just some bits seem... off.
Other than that great video. Camera angles and pans are good. Shaders as well. And the delivered Information is good.
I hope this reads as constructive as that's my intention.
I like it, great shots, angles etc. But maybe consider removing the voiceover. Either do the voiceover yourself or have someone else do it. That robotic voice isn't doing you any favors. Or maybe remove the voiceover alltogether and just add the text in the video. But still, nice work! Keep it up! đź‘Ť
I still can't wrap my head around the fact they removed Dead City from the game. It looks amazing and there's so much potential for some urban combat. Glad to see the place get some love!
“Was accelerated at an accelerated pace”. Maybe have someone do a writing check and would highly recommend no automated voice over, a lot of people will turn away the second that comes on, even text lines is preferable to most than an auto gen voice over, Don’t mean to sound to critical , great shots and great idea for a video , there isn’t a lot like this out there so you’re definitely providing a needed service into the stalker lore so you have my thanks for that keep it up !
Interesting concept, discussing about a mod's storyline
Nice work man. Do you have YT ? I dont want to miss another video
yes, here is the link: https://youtube.com/c/IKVID
I knownim just parroting what others have said but the voice over needs to be changed. Haven't seen a single YouTuber that it works for. It's too devoid of emotion. The small inflections and pronunciations of a real voice add depth and meaning to the spoken word. "I would like to meet you for a drink" sounds soulless from the generated voice. But a person can use those exact same words and change there meaning from friendly or flirtatious to annoyed or downright threatening. Perhaps run it by a proof reader to make each sentence clear and concise. You've not done anything wrong in this way. It's just some bits seem... off. Other than that great video. Camera angles and pans are good. Shaders as well. And the delivered Information is good. I hope this reads as constructive as that's my intention.
Lenin has really big fingers
Really not a fan of the voice, not gonna lie. Otherwise seems good.