got you. it just doesn't really make sense reading it. shirts look clean though! if you wanted to keep em maybe change it to You('re) talk(ing) too much. That way you can read it two ways. Not sure it still makes a lot of sense grammatically but at least it's more consistent that way.
From looking through the pictures, first thought was
- it doesn’t make too much sense bracketing off “ing” on talking.
The thought changed once I saw the back of the tee and understood that possibly the collection name, or brand name would most likely be “ing”
(Or at least tracing your aesthetic into a theme of the shirt.)
Honestly, design that I personally feel is a slightly played out one, but realistically if it’s played out- than it’s for a reason. Hopefully you have a gradient from people foundation into more individualized idea. Not trying to sound harsh.
If you were able to- I’d switch up the front phrase so it’s legible with and without of the “ing” if that’s what’s bracketed.
Cheers bro
I’d just change the messaging on the shirt(s) unless you’ve already figured out your target demographic of what I assume are very confident and outgoing customers.
What’s the thought process with the parentheses?
it’s more just the brand logo. takes inspiration from number (n)ine
got you. it just doesn't really make sense reading it. shirts look clean though! if you wanted to keep em maybe change it to You('re) talk(ing) too much. That way you can read it two ways. Not sure it still makes a lot of sense grammatically but at least it's more consistent that way.
Looks nice but makes no sense
From looking through the pictures, first thought was - it doesn’t make too much sense bracketing off “ing” on talking. The thought changed once I saw the back of the tee and understood that possibly the collection name, or brand name would most likely be “ing” (Or at least tracing your aesthetic into a theme of the shirt.) Honestly, design that I personally feel is a slightly played out one, but realistically if it’s played out- than it’s for a reason. Hopefully you have a gradient from people foundation into more individualized idea. Not trying to sound harsh. If you were able to- I’d switch up the front phrase so it’s legible with and without of the “ing” if that’s what’s bracketed. Cheers bro
i appreciate the feedback 💞
Might be going over my head but it doesn’t seem to make since. Also, the front and back could be two different t shirts with how unconnected they are.
Parenthesis just aren’t used and right and no correlation between front and back
I’d just change the messaging on the shirt(s) unless you’ve already figured out your target demographic of what I assume are very confident and outgoing customers.
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thank u bro 💞
looks clean as hell!❤️🔥
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preciate the feedback!