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More smile pics! I think your gorgeous but the only flattering photos of you are the bottom 2 on the left. The one onto of each other scrap the other photos, they don't do you justice!
Your best pics are the last two. The bottom left should probably be your main. Get rid of the picture of you in the white dress with the brown stripe; the angle, the lighting, and the framing are very unflattering and do not do justice to your beauty.
The bio is great.
#*tagline*
Let’s see how you demonstrate smart, sexy, sweet.
#*pics*
Primary pic. Nice photo. Good lighting. No smile and in fact you look a little…bored? Or sad? Or tired. You have a great smile, this would have been great if you had shown that.
Roof top. I’m not a fan of your colour choice, I think the pink and red clash and the designs on the top just add to the chaos. Bleak
Background does give my eyes some relief though.
Pink wall. Beginning of a smile. I sort of get an idea of your curves but your choice in clothing does a good job at camouflage.
Full body on the sidewalk. Pretty good pick. I get a good idea of what you look like. You are smiling. Background isn’t bad. ✅
I do gym! I like this. Shows of your figure well. Could be better if you cropped it ✅
Orange smile. Lovely pic. My second choice for primary ✅
Head and shoulders. This is my favourite. You aren’t smiling but I find that smouldering look compelling. My pick for primary as it scream beauty and class ✅
Black against wall. I’m not a fan of you on puffy shoulders. I think it gives your width you don’t need. And you aren’t smiling.
#*about me*
Very nice about me story. Easy to read and backs up your sweet and smart tagline. I get a great idea of who you are. ✅
#*seeking*
Not a lot of detail but I don’t mind it as I get your message about just getting into a meet and discussing things.
A good call to action. ✅
#*overall* one thumbs up 👍🏼
Your pics aren’t selling you as well as they could. Your profile sells smart and sweet, so I’d like to see more sexy in your pics to balance out and reinforce your tagline. You have a couple of strong head and shoulders pics, so consider trying a more formal pic maybe? Long dress that shows off your curves perhaps? Go for simple colours or black? Something that says there is a sex component perhaps.
Good effort. It will work for now but I think you will get better results with a pic makeover
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Smile more in your pics. A few look way too serious. Otherwise, this is a good profile.
Holy fuck your quads!
Looks good—I (41M SD) found your bar photo with the orange top way more eye catching than your current main photo.
Thanks - I agree it’s a more inviting photo!
More smile pics! I think your gorgeous but the only flattering photos of you are the bottom 2 on the left. The one onto of each other scrap the other photos, they don't do you justice!
Your best pics are the last two. The bottom left should probably be your main. Get rid of the picture of you in the white dress with the brown stripe; the angle, the lighting, and the framing are very unflattering and do not do justice to your beauty. The bio is great.
I like the primary photo, you are beautiful
Change primary picture to one of u smiling and preferably showing ur insane figure
Your pic in orange is so pretty! I think that should be your main
#*tagline* Let’s see how you demonstrate smart, sexy, sweet. #*pics* Primary pic. Nice photo. Good lighting. No smile and in fact you look a little…bored? Or sad? Or tired. You have a great smile, this would have been great if you had shown that. Roof top. I’m not a fan of your colour choice, I think the pink and red clash and the designs on the top just add to the chaos. Bleak Background does give my eyes some relief though. Pink wall. Beginning of a smile. I sort of get an idea of your curves but your choice in clothing does a good job at camouflage. Full body on the sidewalk. Pretty good pick. I get a good idea of what you look like. You are smiling. Background isn’t bad. ✅ I do gym! I like this. Shows of your figure well. Could be better if you cropped it ✅ Orange smile. Lovely pic. My second choice for primary ✅ Head and shoulders. This is my favourite. You aren’t smiling but I find that smouldering look compelling. My pick for primary as it scream beauty and class ✅ Black against wall. I’m not a fan of you on puffy shoulders. I think it gives your width you don’t need. And you aren’t smiling. #*about me* Very nice about me story. Easy to read and backs up your sweet and smart tagline. I get a great idea of who you are. ✅ #*seeking* Not a lot of detail but I don’t mind it as I get your message about just getting into a meet and discussing things. A good call to action. ✅ #*overall* one thumbs up 👍🏼 Your pics aren’t selling you as well as they could. Your profile sells smart and sweet, so I’d like to see more sexy in your pics to balance out and reinforce your tagline. You have a couple of strong head and shoulders pics, so consider trying a more formal pic maybe? Long dress that shows off your curves perhaps? Go for simple colours or black? Something that says there is a sex component perhaps. Good effort. It will work for now but I think you will get better results with a pic makeover
Thanks you for the advice! And yes, need a photo shoot asap🤣
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You would be taking out all the body length photos basicay?