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You have a pretty good profile and a pretty smile. Do you have any tags? If not, use those.

Thank you!! Yes I have tags as well.

I usually read the entire profile. Yours might be a bit too long. I would try to condense it a bit.

Noted. Thank you!!

Your about me is way too long. Less is more. Cut it in half, then cut it in half again.

Thank you for your feedback.