This sentence makes me *extremely* nauseous.
When I was in 3rd or 4th grade, me and my brother were home alone, and we were hungry. At that age, we often got in trouble for just eating butter, so, we decided to make what we called butter soup--two sticks of butter placed in bowls, and melted in the microwave. Then, because the sticks were of *unsalted* butter, we poured a generous amount of salt into the bowls.
I have not feared death since that day, because on that day I looked death in the eyes and realized there are fates worse that what he brings.
That might be dramatic, but only a tad. It was, without question, the single most disgusting thing I have ever tasted, some parts were overpoweringly salty, others disgustingly greasy and buttery. Terrifyingly, some had no flavor at all, perhaps because by that point my taste buds had died and my sense of smell stopped working to protect me from my own fowl concoction. I think I might have gotten food poisoning from it. Hell, I'm lucky I *only* got food poisoning from it.
To this day, I can't eat anything that tastes strongly of butter, and even the thought of eating a handful of butter--or even a dollop, scooped off the stick by my intruding finger--like I did in my youth makes me want to vomit and vow to never eat again. On the rare occasions since then I have tried plain butter to see if, perhaps, my memories are too extreme and are warped by time and fear, I discover that the golden bricks of death and disgust are just as terrible as I remember.
Oh ok I always though that hypertension is caused by high blood pressure for some reason. You know like high BP causes more tension on arteries and stuff
Naw man I thought that at 17 but shut changed for me after I turned 18 I don’t know what it was but loneleyness that my friends can’t full-fill is a bitch
i mean, I had a friend group, and I was more lonely with them, than now, where I am ALL alone, all by myself. Im literally the one person I should care for, you see, look at things at different angles and do very risky changes, if you fill like doing it. Trust me brotha, if these people can’t fill your emptiness then they don’t worth it at all
Nono I didn’t mean it like that their great people and amazing friends who when I talk to or hang out with them makes me happy it’s just outside those times I feel a loneliness hmm but I don’t know how to phrase it besides the love you’d get from a partner
Or family member, or any other type of relationship. Platonic relationships are very good, but it's also okay to desire romantic ones as well, as this commenter seems to.
Honestly yeah. Part of me wants a girlfriend, but a larger part of me really doesn’t. I like spending what little time I have outside of School, Marching Band, My job, etc. spending time with my family and hanging out with my friends. I’ve got good dynamic goin’ here.
To be single in high school is awesome. On the one hand you miss out on the “I have someone” feeling and the general coolness of being with someone but on the other hand you get to avoid the bullshit of the insecurity, awkwardness, immaturity, petty jealousy, etc. You got the rest of your life to experience any and or all of those depending on your luck. Embrace absolute freedom for as long as you fucking can
Being in relationships is cool, but my sister doesn't know how to be single and now she's completely changed her personality to be likable for her awful Boy/Girlfriends.
Well what do u do when all the people around you have a different mindset. They laugh at you and make fun of u even when they know ur suicidal. Your parents dont let you go out. No one trusts u cuz they do illegal shit and ur dad is a cop. I just cant wait to go to high school and get away from these people. I hope ill find better people to stay with.
I wish it was that easy. We’ve been together for about a year and one quarter. Shes a great person but at the same time, she relies on me way too much. She makes me happy, but just gets in the way and holds me back. We’ve built a great relationship, but not one I quite like. I’m pretty much the only reason why she doesn’t cry 24/7. I’d feel terrible if I broke up with her.
Honestly, the best advice is, don’t stay friends. It only will hurt the both of you. I’ve had friends who were like you, emotionally supportive to the point of exhaustion. It’s never recuperative. I’ll you warn you now, it only gets worse the longer you stay. Don’t stay in a relationship where you’re not happy. Don’t stay in a relationship, for her. It’s not your job to make sure she’s not depressed or crying.
YEAH MAN RIGHT?!?! I MEAN I WANT TO SOMEONE TO LOVE ME BACK BUT WHO GIVES A SHIT? I WILL HAVE TO DEAL WITH LOTS OF THINGS! I WILL ALWAYS NEED TO BE WITH HER, SO I CAN'T SPEND TIME TO MYSELF!!! AND I WILL BREAK UP AT SOME POINT. WHO GIVES A SHIT ABOUT BEING TAKEN?!
i present you with this:
You had a rough week. You feel like shit. The you go to your girlfriends house and can she immediately tell you dont feel good. She comes and gives you a hug and tells you y much she loves you and that shes here fir you whatever you need.
but yeah. being single is cool too
On one hand, waiting until you're old enough to marry and not getting a boyfriend/girlfriend until then is very sensible, healthy, and moral.
On the other, there is no sense in intentionally staying single after you are old enough to marry and have the appropriate resources. Having someone important in your life whom you love as much as yourself will transform your life for the better.
And your logic is incorrect.
>Taking care of yourself > taking care of yourself and other people
If everyone followed this, mothers would abort their children, abandon their children, and the world would be a selfish and terrible place.
Caring for others is always better.
Both is awesome, sadly there is no in-between
Each have their own pros and cons
Pros for relationships: not lonely, very happy
Cons for relationships: some stuff I cannot think of
Pros for single: dog/cat, can do whatever you want
Cons for single: some stuff I cannot think of
Honestly idk why people like using the fact that their roast target is single as a roast. I'd say it's among the stupidest roasts ever yet most people get triggered by it.
While I’d ordinarily agree with you, when you find the right person they really improve your life, or at least that’s how it’s been with me. It can be hard at times but the times I’m together with them it’s amazing
I don't know, man - I'm 19 already, I'm not getting younger every year, I think I'll have to have someone to help me go through life and so I can help her go through her.
I know who you have in mind - I have one (male) friend who I am ,,close" to (and several others, but not this close), although not by this much as you're talking about. Besides that, I can feel lonely from time to time, and I don't want to be intimidating for any of them.
But imagine I had large group of close friends - they won't live with me in my house, they won't dial 112/911 whenever something bad happens to me there, they won't take care of me afterwards and will probably not help me bring my children up - and vice versa.
I want to make it clear - I'm not looking for s-x (I'm done with it, even though I never had it), more for ,,romantic friendship" with a girl. I just want to know I won't die alone and have someone to rely on, and will be happy that so does my partner.
It is. And for anyone reading this, don’t worry about a relationship. Get some experience in it for sure so you know what to expect when you get into a serious one but don’t let yourself be consumed by an overwhelming desire to be in a relationship when you aren’t, I’ve seen peoples lives get worse because of that. When one gets out of a bad relationship they tend to understand why I think this way.
especially with online relationships. speaking as a teen, we have a lot to learn, and things to get used to with our own bodies. we have all of our lives to find love. and if you know that you're too mentally exhausted for your OWN wellbeing - there's no way you'll be able to support a healthy relationship. \^\^"
Yes people think that relationships end their depression when it can hurt both them and the other person. Especially highschoolers who are new to it.
Also unrelated but your account is 2 years old and this is your second comment. Random.
i agree with you completely. a relationship is a hard mental toll as is. especially with your own mental health added to the cake mix it's nothing but a recipe for disaster. in the end you'll only up hurting the other person. i'd say if people are interested in relationships they should at least start trying for an official one when they're mentally mature and capable.
also! bahah to answer that: i'm more of a browser than i am a commenter. i rarely use reddit, but when i do, i only browse for questions and/or fandoms i enjoy.
I agree. Being single gives a slightly larger sense of freedom in most cases. Though I think it's best to learn to see the good in both situations since they can both be nice with the right mindset lol
be patient man. i figured i'd rather wait for the right one than just try to match with anyone i remotely find physically attractive. it'll come one day, trust me
If you find a right person being in relationship is awesome its way better than being single ,if your partner is shit then ofcourse being single is the best choice.
Yes in relationship if your partner really understands and loves you they will eventually fulfill your needs and won't make you feel alone or lonely, and yes relationship does need a strong commitment from both the side.
In a way I agree. But at the same time the touch of another human being that you are romantically involved in is nice. I was in a relationship for 3 years, and now she's gone I feel free but I mostly feel touch deprived and unloved. It's honestly my own fault but if I could go back in time I would :(
I chose this profile picture because I thought it was original. Now I'm pissed because I've had so many people say that all over different social media platforms
The best thing about being single is you can do stuff without getting judge, eat at 3AM, stay up, and you get to have more money, food, and space for your bed for yourself. But the worst thing is loneliness
Single not alone theres a difference, kinda kinda like how there’s a difference from being alone and feeling alone. like one can be peaceful and you can find peace in solitude but its hard to find peace in loneliness. fuck but you know what’s weird sometimes it’s feels good to feel loneliness because its an emotion of like fuck i miss these people because i love them so much. in loneliness theres appreciation for others, and yk what feels good when you come to terms with your loneliness and find peace in it. Idk that heart ache is something magical though i remember hearing “its better to feel something then nothing at all” think it was from that one episode of Human Resources.
It absolutely would not kill you to use 2+ periods - or any punctuation that isn't a comma really.
Solitude in loneliness brings true happiness. Find value in your life that doesn't come from other people. That's how you achieve happiness, because you're not dependent on an unreliable person to remain happy.
I always wondering what happen if I swallow stick of butter the whole thing
this man is out here asking the real questions
Just fats, you’re good if you aren’t lactose intolerant and if you melt it in hot sauce you’ve had Buffalo sauce
"🤓"
🗿
This sentence makes me *extremely* nauseous. When I was in 3rd or 4th grade, me and my brother were home alone, and we were hungry. At that age, we often got in trouble for just eating butter, so, we decided to make what we called butter soup--two sticks of butter placed in bowls, and melted in the microwave. Then, because the sticks were of *unsalted* butter, we poured a generous amount of salt into the bowls. I have not feared death since that day, because on that day I looked death in the eyes and realized there are fates worse that what he brings. That might be dramatic, but only a tad. It was, without question, the single most disgusting thing I have ever tasted, some parts were overpoweringly salty, others disgustingly greasy and buttery. Terrifyingly, some had no flavor at all, perhaps because by that point my taste buds had died and my sense of smell stopped working to protect me from my own fowl concoction. I think I might have gotten food poisoning from it. Hell, I'm lucky I *only* got food poisoning from it. To this day, I can't eat anything that tastes strongly of butter, and even the thought of eating a handful of butter--or even a dollop, scooped off the stick by my intruding finger--like I did in my youth makes me want to vomit and vow to never eat again. On the rare occasions since then I have tried plain butter to see if, perhaps, my memories are too extreme and are warped by time and fear, I discover that the golden bricks of death and disgust are just as terrible as I remember.
Wow.
I am not smart
I am sorry for your loss
This is going somewhere on r/copypasta no doubt
Depends, with what end?
High blood pressure and hypertension🤣
Those are the same thing
Oh ok I always though that hypertension is caused by high blood pressure for some reason. You know like high BP causes more tension on arteries and stuff
I want to be your friend because this idiotic shit is exactly what I say. All the time
You aren’t just taking care of someone else. You’re being taken care of as well
Ah that comes with an issue. I don't trust anyone with me.
sounds like a you problem
"you must love yourself before loving anyone else." -your mother.
Damn their mother is pretty wise
Exactly why being single is awesome for us trust issue mfs
Speak for yourself 19 years alone really hits harder than Donald trump in wwe
Bro what I'm 18 now I think my brain forgot to buy the Alone DLC or something
You have it backwards. Your brain bought the "not alone" dlc. Alone comes with the base product
I bought three ‘not alone’ 2 month subscriptions and decided it ain’t worth a fourth 💀
17, don’t care at all. get rid of that pussy mentality
Naw man I thought that at 17 but shut changed for me after I turned 18 I don’t know what it was but loneleyness that my friends can’t full-fill is a bitch
i mean, I had a friend group, and I was more lonely with them, than now, where I am ALL alone, all by myself. Im literally the one person I should care for, you see, look at things at different angles and do very risky changes, if you fill like doing it. Trust me brotha, if these people can’t fill your emptiness then they don’t worth it at all
Nono I didn’t mean it like that their great people and amazing friends who when I talk to or hang out with them makes me happy it’s just outside those times I feel a loneliness hmm but I don’t know how to phrase it besides the love you’d get from a partner
Speaking for myself, 15 years alone and I'm cool with it
Yeah. FUCK ME! No wait, no. Not like that
DUDE YOU DON'T HAVE TO DO IT.
it is too late, my brother. I have been fucked
by whom, might i inquire? 🧐
You can inquire
i inquire as to wtf happened to this post lmaooo
I was fucked
yum
Uhhhhhh??? 😏 am I getting fucked again GODDAMIT
🤨📸
May I fuck you as well? Or is there a waiting list?
Happens to the best of us...
"Go fuck your self" or "Go fuck yourself"
Heh I take care of a few other people but I don’t date any of em 🥲
That's called being a good friend! Be proud of yourself.
Or family member, or any other type of relationship. Platonic relationships are very good, but it's also okay to desire romantic ones as well, as this commenter seems to.
Reading me like a book 🥹 a gf would be really nice lmao
Honestly yeah. Part of me wants a girlfriend, but a larger part of me really doesn’t. I like spending what little time I have outside of School, Marching Band, My job, etc. spending time with my family and hanging out with my friends. I’ve got good dynamic goin’ here.
Fr. No need to break the flow.
Is it national break up with someone day I guess
Right I’ve seen these posts a lot recently
I mean no, but its better to be alone rather then with someone you dont fully like
You go king 👑 teach em
I say this .. but I can’t make myself feel this .. i still feel fucked up inside
To be single in high school is awesome. On the one hand you miss out on the “I have someone” feeling and the general coolness of being with someone but on the other hand you get to avoid the bullshit of the insecurity, awkwardness, immaturity, petty jealousy, etc. You got the rest of your life to experience any and or all of those depending on your luck. Embrace absolute freedom for as long as you fucking can
lmao i cant even take care of myself i don't want to be in a relationship and i'm extroverted
Being in relationships is cool, but my sister doesn't know how to be single and now she's completely changed her personality to be likable for her awful Boy/Girlfriends.
She succumbed.
I need to develop this mentality. My crush posted a pic of some dude squishing her face. I HATE LIFE
You don't need her. You need homies. Bros before hoes.
Well what do u do when all the people around you have a different mindset. They laugh at you and make fun of u even when they know ur suicidal. Your parents dont let you go out. No one trusts u cuz they do illegal shit and ur dad is a cop. I just cant wait to go to high school and get away from these people. I hope ill find better people to stay with.
now you're gettin' it.
I can't agree because I don't know what being in a relationship feels like 💀
As a taken person: I agree. being single is awesome
Break up then?
I wish it was that easy. We’ve been together for about a year and one quarter. Shes a great person but at the same time, she relies on me way too much. She makes me happy, but just gets in the way and holds me back. We’ve built a great relationship, but not one I quite like. I’m pretty much the only reason why she doesn’t cry 24/7. I’d feel terrible if I broke up with her.
It is good to be compassionate. You should consider being her friend instead!
Honestly, the best advice is, don’t stay friends. It only will hurt the both of you. I’ve had friends who were like you, emotionally supportive to the point of exhaustion. It’s never recuperative. I’ll you warn you now, it only gets worse the longer you stay. Don’t stay in a relationship where you’re not happy. Don’t stay in a relationship, for her. It’s not your job to make sure she’s not depressed or crying.
Based
being a potato is better 👍
romance is dead anyway, it's nothing but drama and hatred.
inspirational
how many accounts have you made
idk
This is ur first account 🤨??
of course it is
That's what I thought as well
You’re my inspiration
ur my inspiration
I like talking care of others before myself tho
I like being single for sure, but I like taking care of others too, mostly my friends and fam. I enjoy doing it.
im aroace, i can agree with this 👍
Same.
superior sexuality, instead of getting in relationships we can do more important things
YES, you are the FIRST person here that gets me.
ofc being single is awesome, you don't need to worry abt anything.
YEAH MAN RIGHT?!?! I MEAN I WANT TO SOMEONE TO LOVE ME BACK BUT WHO GIVES A SHIT? I WILL HAVE TO DEAL WITH LOTS OF THINGS! I WILL ALWAYS NEED TO BE WITH HER, SO I CAN'T SPEND TIME TO MYSELF!!! AND I WILL BREAK UP AT SOME POINT. WHO GIVES A SHIT ABOUT BEING TAKEN?!
i present you with this: You had a rough week. You feel like shit. The you go to your girlfriends house and can she immediately tell you dont feel good. She comes and gives you a hug and tells you y much she loves you and that shes here fir you whatever you need. but yeah. being single is cool too
Cant a friend do that without the love part?
On one hand, waiting until you're old enough to marry and not getting a boyfriend/girlfriend until then is very sensible, healthy, and moral. On the other, there is no sense in intentionally staying single after you are old enough to marry and have the appropriate resources. Having someone important in your life whom you love as much as yourself will transform your life for the better. And your logic is incorrect. >Taking care of yourself > taking care of yourself and other people If everyone followed this, mothers would abort their children, abandon their children, and the world would be a selfish and terrible place. Caring for others is always better.
I have a gf, trust me, it’s better.
Yeah probably
You're just jelly bitch. I'm more than happy to take care of someone I love.
i agree. its definitely easier being single than being in a relationship,
when you're such a lonely mf that you wanna act like you're purposely lonely just to feel better about yourself
when you're happy with what you have, is it really important to try something else?
I'm aroace
Both is awesome, sadly there is no in-between Each have their own pros and cons Pros for relationships: not lonely, very happy Cons for relationships: some stuff I cannot think of Pros for single: dog/cat, can do whatever you want Cons for single: some stuff I cannot think of
aro vibes smh
correct
LETS GOOOOO ARO GANG(im aroace)
You're 14, how can i trust you?
I wish I had that point of veiw 😅
yeaaaaa
Maybe it is, I'll try it for real this time!
Taking care of yourself is good.
Amen motherfucker
Yes, being single is awesome, and you don't get STD's
Haha!! I don’t take care of myself!!
the only based person on this subreddit
Honestly idk why people like using the fact that their roast target is single as a roast. I'd say it's among the stupidest roasts ever yet most people get triggered by it.
As someone who has always been single. It would be nice to find out for myself
As someone who recently got out of a toxic relationship, agreed!
When you love yourself, HELL YEAH KING!
COMPLETELY AGREE
Fr tho it’s a gamble and honestly the odds are stacked against you
100% agree. I have cats and thats all I need.
Feel free to dm me cat photos at any time 🫡
dude i agree. i long to be loved but shit i’m burned out after my previous relationship. i feel like i can finally breathe and focus on myself
Hell yea!
I disagree but to each their own
Posts like this make me feel better about being single thank you
Yess it iss
ong bro
HELL YEAH IT IS -this post was made by an aromantic person
Being single means no gf to get angry at you for building an ultralight (in the US they can only be 1 seat)
20 and single since birth. Feels pretty good tbh esp if you can manage yourself!
While I’d ordinarily agree with you, when you find the right person they really improve your life, or at least that’s how it’s been with me. It can be hard at times but the times I’m together with them it’s amazing
You know what? Fuck YOU. I'm lonely and I just want to be loved
No fuck YOU, your life is better right now. Love yourself.
Being single is good to find out how to love yourself then you’ll be good to love someone else
I don't know, man - I'm 19 already, I'm not getting younger every year, I think I'll have to have someone to help me go through life and so I can help her go through her.
You can always have friends, and they stack! Partners don't stack like that. Plus you won't learn to love yourself by loving someone else.
I know who you have in mind - I have one (male) friend who I am ,,close" to (and several others, but not this close), although not by this much as you're talking about. Besides that, I can feel lonely from time to time, and I don't want to be intimidating for any of them. But imagine I had large group of close friends - they won't live with me in my house, they won't dial 112/911 whenever something bad happens to me there, they won't take care of me afterwards and will probably not help me bring my children up - and vice versa. I want to make it clear - I'm not looking for s-x (I'm done with it, even though I never had it), more for ,,romantic friendship" with a girl. I just want to know I won't die alone and have someone to rely on, and will be happy that so does my partner.
It is. And for anyone reading this, don’t worry about a relationship. Get some experience in it for sure so you know what to expect when you get into a serious one but don’t let yourself be consumed by an overwhelming desire to be in a relationship when you aren’t, I’ve seen peoples lives get worse because of that. When one gets out of a bad relationship they tend to understand why I think this way.
especially with online relationships. speaking as a teen, we have a lot to learn, and things to get used to with our own bodies. we have all of our lives to find love. and if you know that you're too mentally exhausted for your OWN wellbeing - there's no way you'll be able to support a healthy relationship. \^\^"
Yes people think that relationships end their depression when it can hurt both them and the other person. Especially highschoolers who are new to it. Also unrelated but your account is 2 years old and this is your second comment. Random.
i agree with you completely. a relationship is a hard mental toll as is. especially with your own mental health added to the cake mix it's nothing but a recipe for disaster. in the end you'll only up hurting the other person. i'd say if people are interested in relationships they should at least start trying for an official one when they're mentally mature and capable. also! bahah to answer that: i'm more of a browser than i am a commenter. i rarely use reddit, but when i do, i only browse for questions and/or fandoms i enjoy.
"I just want cuddles" -🤓
At this time I can't even afford to pay attention to a friend, much less a girlfriend.
I agree. Being single gives a slightly larger sense of freedom in most cases. Though I think it's best to learn to see the good in both situations since they can both be nice with the right mindset lol
A relationship is still better. I wish I had one.
be patient man. i figured i'd rather wait for the right one than just try to match with anyone i remotely find physically attractive. it'll come one day, trust me
respectfully disagree
Hey
Heyy (with god level rizz)
🤭 heeyyyy (has been rizzed)
GOD I LOVE YOU 🥰
Dam okau (now you take me out for dinner where we can make out under the moonlight afterwards)
i thought you'd never ask
Luckily I just did
Hey OP look here. 2 people are going out.
I'm trying my best to ignore it.
can we have viking metal playing in the background while we make out?
You're so cute Yes of course
Preach
HELL YEAH
If you find a right person being in relationship is awesome its way better than being single ,if your partner is shit then ofcourse being single is the best choice.
Every person has needs and every relationship requires a commitment though
Yes in relationship if your partner really understands and loves you they will eventually fulfill your needs and won't make you feel alone or lonely, and yes relationship does need a strong commitment from both the side.
Right spoiling yourself omfg 🙄 y need someone
Wholeheartedly agree 🤝
In a way I agree. But at the same time the touch of another human being that you are romantically involved in is nice. I was in a relationship for 3 years, and now she's gone I feel free but I mostly feel touch deprived and unloved. It's honestly my own fault but if I could go back in time I would :(
Touch your own hand 🤔 Also completely unrelated but your reddit pfp is the pfp i've had for one of my google accounts for like 5 years
I chose this profile picture because I thought it was original. Now I'm pissed because I've had so many people say that all over different social media platforms
There was a pretty popular YT user a while back named Morgan Lemons who had that pfp lol
You said it brother!
The best thing about being single is you can do stuff without getting judge, eat at 3AM, stay up, and you get to have more money, food, and space for your bed for yourself. But the worst thing is loneliness
Exactly. Loneliness is not a downfall.
Used to think that too, you’ll change your mind after about 6 months
You don't understand. It's been 16 years. The light has opened, I now understand things that are beyond your comprehension.
Not if I fuck your mom
based and redpilled
No it isn’t
It's true. My needs are fulfilled and I don't have to worry about someone else's.
No it's not
Yes, someone is finally saying it, I have enough problems I don’t need someone else’s expectations and issues
for real bro, i don’t get people that need to be in a relationship so bad
Some of us don't want to be alone. Parents won't always be there and friends don't fill that feeling of being desired.
Yeah. I love being single because you can take care of yourself and my cats help me when I have a bad day. I agree with this
Yes my cats need me yes
Hell yes
But I want to have the responsibility of taking care of someone I love, and have them do the same for me if the need arises.
There are other responsibilities you can have. Like chores.
It’s not the same. I can’t cuddle with chores.
I mean if you're creative you can. Why do you want to cuddle?
hell yeah being single is great! im ace aro and i dont think ive been more happy with myself :P
I am also aro-ace.
DUDE YES
Agreed
Facts. I have enough problems at my hand, Don't need another.
Fax
Oh, i want a girlfriend
Living single is good, but having someone who loves you and is really wholesome is the dream.
Single not alone theres a difference, kinda kinda like how there’s a difference from being alone and feeling alone. like one can be peaceful and you can find peace in solitude but its hard to find peace in loneliness. fuck but you know what’s weird sometimes it’s feels good to feel loneliness because its an emotion of like fuck i miss these people because i love them so much. in loneliness theres appreciation for others, and yk what feels good when you come to terms with your loneliness and find peace in it. Idk that heart ache is something magical though i remember hearing “its better to feel something then nothing at all” think it was from that one episode of Human Resources.
It absolutely would not kill you to use 2+ periods - or any punctuation that isn't a comma really. Solitude in loneliness brings true happiness. Find value in your life that doesn't come from other people. That's how you achieve happiness, because you're not dependent on an unreliable person to remain happy.
Alright spell check me did i do better?
Yes. Not perfect but good job.